In the cutting-edge era, vehicles plays an essential role in all individuals life because through vehicles they can easily travel without any difficulty.The question is manufacturing and utilization of vehicles harm the atmosphere but their popularity is increasing because it is comfortable and folk save their time and it could be control with making car -sharing scheme.
To commence with, why the manufacture and use of car damage the environment but their popularity is increasing .The first and foremost reason is that its comfortability .To make it more clear, if people use car so they could save their time and they can easily travel without facing any problem . When folks travel with cars, they also feel relaxed .For instance, the headline of ' The Mascow times ' revealed that in the world 80% masses like to travel by car because through cars they can save their time and feel comfortable .As a result , human beings can travel easily and save their time.
On the other side, how could this be solved. Firstly, by making schemes like car - sharing. In other words in the modern era, if people share their car with other person so it could be better because car is source of air pollution .For example , a survey was conducted by the department of education and observed that in Americ's environment is good compared to other country. Therefore, type of scheme help to make pollution free environment .
To sum up, production and use of car damages the environment but their popularity is increasing because it is comfortable and through car individuals save their time and use of car could be control of government made scheme like car - sharing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98916967509 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72784653606 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490974729242 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.677165786 49.4020404114 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.75 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.625 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.875 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 47.0 5.01903807615 936% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380945211413 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181991336036 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121630732852 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247230726164 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817712491776 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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