Some people use the internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples from your own experience.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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These days, there is an ongoing debate f...
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...nt and explore the logical conclusion. To start with, some people contemplate i...
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... beneficial and cure the person without loosing the money to doctor. For example normal fev...
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...st surfing recommendation on internet. On contrary, other people argue that tak...
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...where individual finds himself alone. In recapitulate, as aforementioned this ...
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... both the views of this argument. In my personal opinion, people should visit doctor before any ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 253.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53359683794 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80402399755 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569169960474 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7589354519 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108640187798 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420553110294 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396263929377 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727051890742 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304758578639 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6.0
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