In the memorandum from the president of Humana University, the president suggested to initiate and actively promote online degree program like those in Omni University. The suggestion is based on the fact that expenditures for dormitory and classroom space are decreased since online instruction take place via internet. However, to evaluate the argument, we need to examine the following stated or unstated assumptions.
In the memorandum, to increase enrollment and to solve the problem of budget deficit, Online program should be promoted. The argument considered Omni university and Humana University as comparable to each other. Perhaps it might be possible that Omni university is excellent in technical field whereas Humana University works in arts and business field. Moreover, it might be possible that Humana university courses are more practical than Omni’s courses. Therefore, these unstated assumptions need to be considered to examine the argument.
Along the above, it might be possible that Humana University is very old and required periodic maintenance for operation of the building. This assumptions is not considered in the argument. As we know, all building require frequent maintenance of building , Electric wiring , Building Paints, wooden work whereas new building doesn’t require that much maintainence. Therefore, this aspect also need to see to evaluate the argument.
Lastly, It might be possible that Omni University does not care about the standard of living in dormitory and not fulling desired standard. Is the Omni University fulfilling the desired standard? Is Humana University providing more than desired standard? Therefore, All these assumptions are need to examined to evaluate the argument.
In the conclusion, above noted assumptions need to be examined carefully to reach the conclusion that decision to initate and actively promote online degree will have desired impact or not.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 291 350
No. of Characters: 1593 1500
No. of Different Words: 141 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.13 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.474 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.813 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 133 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.118 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.755 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.369 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.369 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested initiating'.
Suggestion: suggested initiating
...ent of Humana University, the president suggested to initiate and actively promote online degree prog...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...ntenance for operation of the building. This assumptions is not considered in the ar...
^^^^
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ation of the building. This assumptions is not considered in the argument. As we k...
^^
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...require frequent maintenance of building , Electric wiring , Building Paints, wood...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...aintenance of building , Electric wiring , Building Paints, wooden work whereas ne...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 290.0 441.139720559 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67931034483 5.12650576532 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96307695041 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 204.123752495 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59920159681 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4688768269 57.8364921388 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8823529412 119.503703932 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 23.324526521 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 5.70786347227 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243886926851 0.218282227539 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883623101478 0.0743258471296 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757218333795 0.0701772020484 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132147900097 0.128457276422 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816733847353 0.0628817314937 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 48.3550499002 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.197005988 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.5979740519 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32208582834 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.