The Prunty County failed their effort to decrease the number of traffice accients by the means of lower down the speed limit from 55 to 45 mph on highways, with the observation of highway patrol that there are still many drivers driving faster than the limitation. The author suggests that the measure taken by Butler County is efficient in declining the traffice accicdents, that is widening the lane and other improvements of highways. There are still some questions before making descision of bringing the implements of Butler County into The Prunty County.
First of all, there are no statistics of traffic accidents in Prunty County, which can show us the relativity between the limitation of speed on highways and traffic accents. Because there is other possiblity of the reasons of these accidents which weren't caused by the speed limit. As DUI or drugs, they are all serious crimes on highway which may casue serious accidents by the drunk drviers. What's more, the author also doesn't metion the accident place, anther important infomaion. Becasuse the traffic accisents could happen everywhere, as in the city there is a high possiblity of crashing by cars.
Besides the data of the accidents,the author also doesn't show us the conditions of the two counties.Without the reference of the two counties, we cannot make judgement neither the reason of the unabated number of traffic accidents in Prunty County nor the possbility of taking the same measures of the Butler County in the Prunty County.
As we do not know the portion of the highways in all roads of the Prunty County, we cannot make further judgement of the highway traffic accicents influence on the county, there is a possible means that the county has a very short of highway compared with city road which means that the County should concerntrate more on the city road accidents.
On the other hand , with no more information of the Butler County, there is no obvious evidence can prove whether these measurements are suitable for the Prunty County. Maybe the Butler county is full of city road , the high way of the Butler county takes trivial portion of all the roads, likewise.
In conclusion ,the author does not make an exhasutive survey on both of the two counties, that makes there is no obvious relevance between the two counties, before making futher advice, the author need to find out the main cause of those traffic accidents in the Prunty County and research more data of the Butler County.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The Prunty County failed their effort to decrease the number of traffice accients by the means of lower down the speed limit from 55 to 45 mph on highways, with the observation of highway patrol that there are still many drivers driving faster than the limitation.
Error: mph Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: traffice Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: accients Suggestion: accents
Sentence: The author suggests that the measure taken by Butler County is efficient in declining the traffice accicdents, that is widening the lane and other improvements of highways.
Error: traffice Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: accicdents Suggestion: accidents
Sentence: There are still some questions before making descision of bringing the implements of Butler County into The Prunty County.
Error: descision Suggestion: decision
Sentence: Because there is other possiblity of the reasons of these accidents which weren't caused by the speed limit.
Error: possiblity Suggestion: possibility
Error: weren Suggestion: were
Sentence: As DUI or drugs, they are all serious crimes on highway which may casue serious accidents by the drunk drviers.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: casue Suggestion: case
Error: drviers Suggestion: drivers
Sentence: What's more, the author also doesn't metion the accident place, anther important infomaion.
Error: infomaion Suggestion: information
Error: doesn Suggestion: does
Error: metion Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Becasuse the traffic accisents could happen everywhere, as in the city there is a high possiblity of crashing by cars.
Error: accisents Suggestion: accidents
Error: possiblity Suggestion: possibility
Sentence: Besides the data of the accidents,the author also doesn't show us the conditions of the two counties.Without the reference of the two counties, we cannot make judgement neither the reason of the unabated number of traffic accidents in Prunty County nor the possbility of taking the same measures of the Butler County in the Prunty County.
Error: possbility Suggestion: possibility
Error: doesn Suggestion: does
Error: judgement Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: As we do not know the portion of the highways in all roads of the Prunty County, we cannot make further judgement of the highway traffic accicents influence on the county, there is a possible means that the county has a very short of highway compared with city road which means that the County should concerntrate more on the city road accidents.
Error: concerntrate Suggestion: concentrate
Error: accicents Suggestion: accidents
Error: judgement Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In conclusion ,the author does not make an exhasutive survey on both of the two counties, that makes there is no obvious relevance between the two counties, before making futher advice, the author need to find out the main cause of those traffic accidents in the Prunty County and research more data of the Butler County.
Error: exhasutive Suggestion: exhaustive
Error: futher Suggestion: father
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 20 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 423 350
No. of Characters: 2019 1500
No. of Different Words: 185 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.535 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.773 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.405 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 157 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.538 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.317 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.411 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.684 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.184 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... speed on highways and traffic accents. Because there is other possiblity of the reason...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...of the reasons of these accidents which werent caused by the speed limit. As DUI or dr...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...serious accidents by the drunk drviers. Whats more, the author also doesnt metion the...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...nk drviers. Whats more, the author also doesnt metion the accident place, anther impor...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...rs. Besides the data of the accidents,the author also doesnt show us the conditio...
^^^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e data of the accidents,the author also doesnt show us the conditions of the two count...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Without
...w us the conditions of the two counties.Without the reference of the two counties, we c...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ity road accidents. On the other hand , with no more information of the Butler ...
^^
Line 9, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e the Butler county is full of city road , the high way of the Butler county takes...
^^
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ll the roads, likewise. In conclusion ,the author does not make an exhasutive s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, likewise, may, so, still, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 55.5748502994 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 418.0 441.139720559 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96650717703 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54788160641 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 204.123752495 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456937799043 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.8473053892 140% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.4585295156 57.8364921388 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.692307692 119.503703932 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1538461538 23.324526521 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 5.70786347227 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245504344045 0.218282227539 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945240115243 0.0743258471296 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671745587093 0.0701772020484 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13375510175 0.128457276422 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643706789891 0.0628817314937 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 14.3799401198 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.3550499002 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.197005988 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.1389221557 133% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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