The council of Maple County, concerned about the county's becoming overdeveloped, is debating a proposed measure that would prevent the development of existing farmland in the county. But the council is also concerned that such a restriction, by limiting the supply of new housing, could lead to significant increases in the price of housing in the county. Proponents of the measure note that Chestnut County established a similar measure ten years ago, and its housing prices have increased only modestly since. However, opponents of the measure note that Pine County adopted restrictions on the development of new residential housing fifteen years ago, and its housing prices have since more than doubled. The council currently predicts that the proposed measure, if passed, will result in a significant increase in housing prices in Maple County.
The council of maple county, concerned about the county's becoming overdeveloped, is debating a proposed measure that would prevent the development of existing farmland in the county. they have assumed many things which will lead to an insignificant result. I will try to present some fallacies in this case.
First, By limiting the supply of new housing, the council is concerned about lead to significant increases in the price of housing in the county. here enough evidence is not given that by limiting the supply of new housing how will the price will increase the housing in the country. they have not provided any stats or substantiate with any present example, which will prove the council correct.
Secondly, they are comparing chestnut country and pine county to decide what can be the consequences, if we applied the same rule in the maple county. here this comparison is totally irrelevant because they are just comparing with the chestnut county 10 years ago and pine county 15 years ago. we can not compare the situation of 10 years and 15 years of different county which they may have their own challenges. Otherwise, it would be better to compare economically. this would have given far better results.
Thirdly, The council currently predicts that the proposed measure, if passed, will result in a significant increase in housing prices in maple county. But what is the prediction criteria? how they are predicting that if passed, will result in a significant increase in housing prices in maple county. there is no stats given, showing that it will be true. also, they are not giving any example of a similar kind which will show that it can also happen in maple county.
In essence, the assumption given is full of fallacies. there is no perfect or real example which shows that by limiting the supply of new housing will lead to significant increases in the price of housing in the county.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 324 350
No. of Characters: 1549 1500
No. of Different Words: 133 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.243 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.781 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.52 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 112 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 40.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.209 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.462 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.79 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ent of existing farmland in the county. they have assumed many things which will lea...
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Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e fallacies in this case. First, By limiting the supply of new housing, t...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
... in the price of housing in the county. here enough evidence is not given that by li...
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ll increase the housing in the country. they have not provided any stats or substant...
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Line 13, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
...lied the same rule in the maple county. here this comparison is totally irrelevant b...
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Line 13, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...years ago and pine county 15 years ago. we can not compare the situation of 10 yea...
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Line 13, column 470, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ould be better to compare economically. this would have given far better results. ...
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Line 19, column 189, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
...y. But what is the prediction criteria? how they are predicting that if passed, wil...
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Line 19, column 302, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ease in housing prices in maple county. there is no stats given, showing that it will...
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Line 19, column 302, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no stats'?
Suggestion: there are no stats
...ease in housing prices in maple county. there is no stats given, showing that it will be true. al...
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Line 19, column 314, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stats'' or 'stat's'?
Suggestion: stats'; stat's
...ing prices in maple county. there is no stats given, showing that it will be true. al...
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Line 19, column 357, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ts given, showing that it will be true. also, they are not giving any example of a s...
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Line 25, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... assumption given is full of fallacies. there is no perfect or real example which sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 324.0 441.139720559 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99074074074 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61896310857 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 204.123752495 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435185185185 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 705.55239521 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2996146959 57.8364921388 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 119.503703932 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.324526521 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262708147061 0.218282227539 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963773059241 0.0743258471296 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184624005306 0.0701772020484 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170268900834 0.128457276422 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151983269142 0.0628817314937 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.3799401198 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.32208582834 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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