The following appeared as a letter to the editor from a Central Plaza store owner.
"Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
All the content of this letter was full of weak arguments and assumptions. The author is advocating the belief of some shop owners of plaza that their business is decreased due to skateboarders and will replenish when the skateboarders will be prohibited.
The author is suggesting that the plaza has become more littered and vandalized, it may be true but he is making the assumption that it is dur to skateboarders, it may be because of other visitors who do not use skateboards. Moreover, if there is problem like this, then it means the management and secruity of the plaza is not doing their job diligently.
Author also assumes that the decrease in the shops of plaza is because of the popularity of skateboarding. It may also be true that the shops were not been able to keep up with the demands of the customer and were not making any profits. Also, the owners who believe that skateboarders are responsible for their fate may hold some personal grudge against them.
To be brief the premises put forward by the author are based on assumptions and have many loopholes. Prohibition of anybody is a strong action, which cannot be backed by such weak arguments and assumptions, solid proof is required to implement such recommendation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...popularity of skateboarding. It may also be true that the shops were not been abl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 55.5748502994 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 2260.96107784 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 213.0 441.139720559 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84037558685 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9490893501 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 204.123752495 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572769953052 0.468620217663 122% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 705.55239521 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.078739278 57.8364921388 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.555555556 119.503703932 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 23.324526521 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.70786347227 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112360321325 0.218282227539 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500393827261 0.0743258471296 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419770872582 0.0701772020484 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685794170832 0.128457276422 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386539996479 0.0628817314937 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 98.500998004 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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