The following appeared in a letter from a firm providing investment advice for a client.
"Most homes in the northeastern United States, where winters are typically cold, have traditionally used oil as their major fuel for heating. Last heating season that region experienced 90 days with below-normal temperatures, and climate forecasters predict that this weather pattern will continue for several more years. Furthermore, many new homes are being built in the region in response to recent population growth. Because of these trends, we predict an increased demand for heating oil and recommend investment in Consolidated Industries, one of whose major business operations is the retail sale of home heating oil."
Wintertime calls for heat through a variety of ways in order to stay warm and cozy. Traditionally, oil has been a prominent type of fuel for heating. However due to advancement in research and technology, oil is not always the first answer to kindle warmth. Consolidated Industries provided some just reasons on why oil heating is still eminent, but they did not include enough to conclude that oil is superior amongst all other types of heating choices.
Due to global warming and inconsistent whether changes, it cannot be assured the next winters will be just as cold as last years. The weather is slowly transitioning towards warming temperatures even during what should be the coldest season. The prediction made by whether forecasters are not always set in stone. Last week, the weatherman predicted showers all weekend and when the weekend came, there was a only a few drops of rain. If weather cannot be predicted only several days in advance, it’s difficult to confirm that years of prediction are accurate.
Recent population spurts do not signify consistent growth over long periods of time. Even though there will be new homes in this region, it is not guaranteed that every single house will be bought. There is also no assurance that there are enough people to fill these new homes. The firm is assuming that everyone can afford a brand new home, but that is not the cause in today’s economy. There will be new homes that are left unsold because people lack the income to succumb to a huge financial responsibility.
As time changes, so do people and their choices for heat substitutions during the cold winter. There are electric heaters, fireplaces, electrical blankets and water heaters, just to name a few. Many people might find heating oils dangerous or historic and tend to stray away from this product. The firm provided no data or research to confirm that oils are still the leading fuel for heat. Without the right information to support their claim, the firm is only stating what will benefit them most.
In a world filled with choices, everyone has their own preference on what to use to stay warm during the wintertime. Oil was once a leading fuel for heat, but may not still be the top choice for every home. The firm did not provide enough information to backup their belief that heating oil will be in high demand during this upcoming and next several winters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 408, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nd and when the weekend came, there was a only a few drops of rain. If weather ca...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...one has their own preference on what to use to stay warm during the wintertime. Oil...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: CAN_BACKUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to back up'?
Suggestion: to back up
...firm did not provide enough information to backup their belief that heating oil will be i...
^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244008714597 0.25644967241 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.161220043573 0.15541462614 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111111111111 0.0836205057962 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0675381263617 0.0520304965353 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0217864923747 0.0272364105082 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0980392156863 0.125424944231 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0326797385621 0.0416121511921 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5551893947 2.79052419416 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0348583877996 0.026700313972 131% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0893246187364 0.113004496875 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0261437908497 0.0255425247493 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130718954248 0.0127820249294 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2410.0 2731.13054187 88% => OK
No of words: 411.0 446.07635468 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86374695864 6.12365571057 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.57801047555 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340632603406 0.378187486979 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250608272506 0.287650121315 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.143552311436 0.208842608468 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0827250608273 0.135150697306 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5551893947 2.79052419416 92% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 207.018472906 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542579075426 0.469332199767 116% => OK
Word variations: 62.2054518766 52.1807786196 119% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.039408867 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6818181818 23.2022227129 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.243919846 57.7814097925 49% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.545454545 141.986410481 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6818181818 23.2022227129 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.724660767414 50% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.58251231527 84% => OK
Readability: 43.7426454324 51.9672348444 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.49565217391 1.8405768891 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297843686717 0.441005458295 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.086179479096 0.135418324435 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0551103355073 0.0829849096947 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.484075931713 0.58762219726 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0995125103435 0.147661913831 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10570468271 0.193483328276 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532239336121 0.0970749176394 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.248366803981 0.42659136922 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0593780459548 0.0774707102158 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191689158449 0.312017818177 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330085786863 0.0698173142475 47% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.33743842365 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.82512315271 145% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 6.46551724138 108% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.82389162562 142% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 14.657635468 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.