The following appeared in a memorandum from the planning department of an electric power company.
"Several recent surveys indicate that home owners are increasingly eager to conserve energy. At the same time, manufacturers are now marketing many home appliances, such as refrigerators and air conditioners, that are almost twice as energy efficient as those sold a decade ago. Also, new technologies for better home insulation and passive solar heating are readily available to reduce the energy needed for home heating. Therefore, the total demand for electricity in our area will not increase—and may decline slightly. Since our three electric generating plants in operation for the past twenty years have always met our needs, construction of new generating plants will not be necessary."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
In given argument, the author put forth his conclusion of not building new electricity generating plant based on his explaination for declining electricity demand. While explaining his assumption his tells about some surveys taken place and plans made by certain home appliances manufacturers. While going through these arguments we get to know about loop holes and assumptions made by author to prove his conclusion correct.
While concluding author states direct relation between purchase of new electricity saving appliances and electricity demand. Purchasing more energy efficient appliances doesn't implies the less usage of energy. May be due to huge purchase of appliances each use will cost high usage of energy. May be high usage of appliances by certain mass users such as in industries, hospitals, commercial complexes, etc electricity requirement will enhance. Based on these evidences we can say that there can't be direct relation between purchase of new electricity saving appliances and electricity demand.
Furthermore, author vaguely compares the efficiency of new appliances to old ones. While stating it he says, "new appliances are almost twice as energy efficient as old ones". What does almost implies? Does all new appliances are more efficient than old ones? There may be a case that old appliance doesn't give much performance but may last for long time. Author has not mentioned efficiency is considered in what respect. This creates an ambiguity in statement regarding comparison of appliances.
Moreover, It is stated that manufacturers of appliances are marketing them recently. Marketing doesn't gives guarantee of sale. May be customers have already purchased similar kind of items from other vendors. These kind of appliances usually cost more than simple ones, thus, many of customer may not prefer to purchase them. This is the reason why marketing statement doesn't seems up to the mark.
From above discussion we can conclude that, not building new electricity generating plant may lead to certain disastrous effects due to rise in demand in future. Thus author may make more thorough study and add more evidences to reduce the assumptions made.
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also need to argue:
Therefore, the total demand for electricity in our area will not increase—and may decline slightly. Since our three electric generating plants in operation for the past twenty years have always met our needs, construction of new generating plants will not be necessary.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 12 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 344 350
No. of Characters: 1802 1500
No. of Different Words: 187 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.307 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.238 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.83 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 65 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.636 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.653 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.322 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.171 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...thor to prove his conclusion correct. While concluding author states direct relatio...
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Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...hasing more energy efficient appliances doesnt implies the less usage of energy. May b...
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Line 2, column 493, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n these evidences we can say that there cant be direct relation between purchase of ...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'imply'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: imply
...ent as old ones'. What does almost implies? Does all new appliances are more effic...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... There may be a case that old appliance doesnt give much performance but may last for ...
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Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... are marketing them recently. Marketing doesnt gives guarantee of sale. May be custome...
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Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...milar kind of items from other vendors. These kind of appliances usually cost more than si...
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Line 4, column 370, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s is the reason why marketing statement doesnt seems up to the mark. From above disc...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...isastrous effects due to rise in demand in future. Thus author may make more thorough stu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, while, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 340.0 441.139720559 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46176470588 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8814884658 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.468620217663 117% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 705.55239521 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1522442956 57.8364921388 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4090909091 119.503703932 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 23.324526521 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132542045762 0.218282227539 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423665713679 0.0743258471296 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313873752221 0.0701772020484 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703604434547 0.128457276422 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233755560824 0.0628817314937 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.3799401198 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.3550499002 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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