The following appeared on the Picasso School of Art website.
The Picasso School of Art should be the premier choice for parents considering enrolling their child for art lessons. First of all, the Picasso School welcomes youngsters of age; there is no portfolio submission required to attend the school. Second, the school offers instruction in nearly all styles and genres of art from drawing and painting to sculpture and photography. Third, the faculty includes some of the most distinguished artists in the area. Finally, many Picasso alumni have gone on to become well-known and highly paid professional artists.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The following appeared on the Picasso School of Art website. Author had drawn conclusion, Picasso School of Art should be premier choice for parents considering enrolling their child for art lessons because many Picasso alumini have gone to become well-known and highly paid professional artists. In supporting to argument, author further noted facility which provided by Picasso School.In Supporting argument author made several stated and unstated assumption.
Firstly, Author stated that Picasso school welcomes youngsters of age; there is no portfolio submission required to attend school. Author made strong assumption for attending school there is no portfolio submission required for only Youngsters. Author need to spectifically mention Youngsters age group, is there any age group limit. Portfolio submission requirement for youngsters and what about the rest of students.
Secondly, In addition to further importance of Picasso School, author mention that school offers instruction in nearly all styles and genres of art from drawing and paintaing to sculpate and photography. Author had strong made assumption that each and every youngster have offered by this instruction. Author need an data instruction provided by school whether they are off free or paid, because an school provide instruction from all styles and genres from drwaing and painting to sculpture and photography. Even though student paid coursw whether it really worth. Author need to survey about, offer instruction which of styles and genres they cover.
Thirdly, Author mention that, faculty includes some of the most distinguished artist in the area. Author had made strong assumption that, by including an distinguished artist yougster are more encouraged and get good knoweldge of an art. Author need to survey about artist who is introduced by artists, becuase if some artists have paid sound salary, he may not up to skill which an one artist required. Because, it impact on youngsters mind who join Picasso school for there future in an art lesson. so on this basis, author made conclusion that, many Picassio alumini have gone on to become well-known and highly paid professional artists. Author made strong assumption that, those who enrolling in Picasso School become well known and highly paid professional artists. Author need an specific evidence about privious student, there ability. If they are strong passionate it might be showing they have made strong carrer in their field. But this siutation might not hold true for all student.
In Conclusion, Author need to evaluate evidences which is required for stated and unstated assumption. Arugument become weaken argument, becuase several unstated assumption.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Sentence: Author need to spectifically mention Youngsters age group, is there any age group limit.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to Youngsters and age
Sentence: Secondly, In addition to further importance of Picasso School, author mention that school offers instruction in nearly all styles and genres of art from drawing and paintaing to sculpate and photography.
Description: The fragment author mention that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace mention with verb, past tense
Sentence: Author had strong made assumption that each and every youngster have offered by this instruction.
Description: The word strong is not usually used as an adverb
Suggestion: Refer to strong
Sentence: Author need an data instruction provided by school whether they are off free or paid, because an school provide instruction from all styles and genres from drwaing and painting to sculpture and photography.
Description: The fragment Author need an is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace need with verb, past tense
Description: The fragment school provide instruction is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace provide with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: Author need to survey about artist who is introduced by artists, becuase if some artists have paid sound salary, he may not up to skill which an one artist required.
Description: The fragment , becuase if is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace becuase with verb, past tense
Sentence: Because, it impact on youngsters mind who join Picasso school for there future in an art lesson. so on this basis, author made conclusion that, many Picassio alumini have gone on to become well-known and highly paid professional artists.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to it and impact
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to youngsters and mind
Description: The fragment who join Picasso is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace join with verb, past tense
Sentence: Author made strong assumption that, those who enrolling in Picasso School become well known and highly paid professional artists.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to who and enrolling
Sentence: Author need an specific evidence about privious student, there ability.
Description: The fragment Author need an is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace need with verb, past tense
Description: An existential there is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to there and ability
Sentence: The following appeared on the Picasso School of Art website.
Error: website Suggestion: west
Sentence: Author had drawn conclusion, Picasso School of Art should be premier choice for parents considering enrolling their child for art lessons because many Picasso alumini have gone to become well-known and highly paid professional artists.
Error: alumini Suggestion: alumni
Error: well-known Suggestion: well known
Sentence: In supporting to argument, author further noted facility which provided by Picasso School.In Supporting argument author made several stated and unstated assumption.
Error: unstated Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Author need to spectifically mention Youngsters age group, is there any age group limit.
Error: spectifically Suggestion: specifically
Sentence: Secondly, In addition to further importance of Picasso School, author mention that school offers instruction in nearly all styles and genres of art from drawing and paintaing to sculpate and photography.
Error: paintaing Suggestion: painting
Error: sculpate Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Author need an data instruction provided by school whether they are off free or paid, because an school provide instruction from all styles and genres from drwaing and painting to sculpture and photography.
Error: drwaing Suggestion: drawing
Sentence: Even though student paid coursw whether it really worth.
Error: coursw Suggestion: course
Sentence: Author had made strong assumption that, by including an distinguished artist yougster are more encouraged and get good knoweldge of an art.
Error: knoweldge Suggestion: knowledge
Error: yougster Suggestion: youngster
Sentence: Author need to survey about artist who is introduced by artists, becuase if some artists have paid sound salary, he may not up to skill which an one artist required.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: becuase Suggestion: because
Sentence: Because, it impact on youngsters mind who join Picasso school for there future in an art lesson. so on this basis, author made conclusion that, many Picassio alumini have gone on to become well-known and highly paid professional artists.
Error: alumini Suggestion: alumni
Error: well-known Suggestion: well known
Sentence: Author need an specific evidence about privious student, there ability.
Error: privious Suggestion: previous
Sentence: If they are strong passionate it might be showing they have made strong carrer in their field.
Error: carrer Suggestion: carrier
Sentence: But this siutation might not hold true for all student.
Error: siutation Suggestion: situation
Sentence: In Conclusion, Author need to evaluate evidences which is required for stated and unstated assumption.
Error: unstated Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Arugument become weaken argument, becuase several unstated assumption.
Error: becuase Suggestion: because
Error: unstated Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 12 2
Read a good grammar book.
No. of Spelling Errors: 16 2
Double check spelling errors.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 12 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 16 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 416 350
No. of Characters: 2242 1500
No. of Different Words: 184 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.516 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.389 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.618 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 199 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 128 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 56 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.909 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.959 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.554 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.135 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Picasso seems to be countable; consider using: 'many '.
Suggestion: many
...ing their child for art lessons because many Picasso alumini have gone to become well-known ...
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Line 1, column 388, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...cility which provided by Picasso School.In Supporting argument author made several...
^^
Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ffered by this instruction. Author need an data instruction provided by school whe...
^^
Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ther they are off free or paid, because an school provide instruction from all sty...
^^
Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
..., Author mention that, faculty includes some of the most distinguished artist in the area. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...de strong assumption that, by including an distinguished artist yougster are more ...
^^
Line 7, column 381, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nd salary, he may not up to skill which an one artist required. Because, it impact...
^^
Line 7, column 417, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'impacts'?
Suggestion: impacts
...ich an one artist required. Because, it impact on youngsters mind who join Picasso sch...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 502, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...hool for there future in an art lesson. so on this basis, author made conclusion t...
^^
Line 7, column 716, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t, those who enrolling in Picasso School become well known and highly paid profes...
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Line 7, column 786, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... paid professional artists. Author need an specific evidence about privious studen...
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Line 7, column 846, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... about privious student, there ability. If they are strong passionate it might be ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 16.3942115768 146% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2303.0 2260.96107784 102% => OK
No of words: 415.0 441.139720559 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54939759036 5.12650576532 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69479695228 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 204.123752495 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465060240964 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9914540597 57.8364921388 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.130434783 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0434782609 23.324526521 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69565217391 5.70786347227 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344625799946 0.218282227539 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120042679714 0.0743258471296 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151324072439 0.0701772020484 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216255233335 0.128457276422 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163095506506 0.0628817314937 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.3799401198 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.5979740519 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 98.500998004 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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