The following argument is talking about any country social, economic and political conditions are affected by illegal immigrants; discuss about its cause,effect and little assumption based on immigrants facts. The author main point is country's autonomy system have a closer relation with the border. the author also say that illegal immigrants are threat for the country. The information is given by the authors to support his position is not sufficient.Its contains lack of information and having lots of flaws which are presenting following paragraph.
Firstly, the authors state that, any country's governmental strengths depends on border-line. It's not true. Its depends on country,s governmental body, people, economic, soldiers,and so on. So the authors can not tell about any individuals factor for country,s autonomy.
Additionally, the authors try to make relationship between the illegal immigrants and govt security. But the authors can not give any convincing way to justify his positions. The authors can strong his position by lucid what's the reason behind the relation.
Finally, the authors state about the economy and national identity narrows condition and providing for that reason is the increase of immigrants. the authors are not providing any reason behind his position. The economy
of the country can diminish by disaster, lack of power, lack of industries or any others reasons. So its can not be only reason for economic disaster.
In a nutshell, we can say that this argument is with full of fault . Its not contains any logical flow of information.There are no statistical information behinds this arguments. By providing more information it can be strong enough.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...egal immigrants; discuss about its cause,effect and little assumption based on immigran...
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...e author main point is countrys autonomy system have a closer relation with the b...
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...have a closer relation with the border. the author also say that illegal immigrant...
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...ion with the border. the author also say that illegal immigrants are threat for t...
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...reat for the country. The information is given by the authors to support his posi...
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...ne. Its not true. Its depends on country,s governmental body, people, economic, s...
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...nomy. Additionally, the authors try to make relationship between the illega...
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...uthors can strong his position by lucid whats the reason behind the relation. Fi...
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...t reason is the increase of immigrants. the authors are not providing any reason be...
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... reason behind his position. The economy of the country can diminish by disaster,...
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... power, lack of industries or any others reasons. So its can not be only reason f...
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...viding more information it can be strong enough.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'so', 'talking about']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.279069767442 0.25644967241 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.126245847176 0.15541462614 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0996677740864 0.0836205057962 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046511627907 0.0520304965353 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0365448504983 0.0272364105082 134% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.119601328904 0.125424944231 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0332225913621 0.0416121511921 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00933798842 2.79052419416 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00996677740864 0.026700313972 37% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112956810631 0.113004496875 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0232558139535 0.0255425247493 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00332225913621 0.0127820249294 26% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1718.0 2731.13054187 63% => OK
No of words: 264.0 446.07635468 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.50757575758 6.12365571057 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.57801047555 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.435606060606 0.378187486979 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.363636363636 0.287650121315 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.253787878788 0.208842608468 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.174242424242 0.135150697306 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00933798842 2.79052419416 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 207.018472906 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526515151515 0.469332199767 112% => OK
Word variations: 51.2056819583 52.1807786196 98% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.039408867 90% => OK
Sentence length: 14.6666666667 23.2022227129 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4227060205 57.7814097925 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 141.986410481 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 23.2022227129 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.724660767414 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 3.58251231527 586% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.0303030303 51.9672348444 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.06349206349 1.8405768891 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494867230496 0.441005458295 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111635099916 0.135418324435 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.061538584854 0.0829849096947 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.578519891257 0.58762219726 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131029421803 0.147661913831 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180655868504 0.193483328276 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943470112291 0.0970749176394 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.272608878904 0.42659136922 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113272095489 0.0774707102158 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284149502979 0.312017818177 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103910579729 0.0698173142475 149% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.87684729064 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.82512315271 83% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 6.46551724138 77% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 14.657635468 89% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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