The following memo appeared in newsletter of the west meria public health council. Author made an conclusion that daily use of nutritional supplement derived from fish oil as a good way to prevent from colds and lower absenteeism. There are certain question to be asked by author before making any conclusion. Take look in the given memo before it improve.
Firstly,Study shows that consumption of fish is very high at east meria, so that people visit doctor only ones or twice per year for treatment of cold. Survey have noticed that east meria location, whether it is an located at sea side? If east meria located sea side so aboviously consumption of fish is very high.people prefer to visit doctors only ones or twice in year.If an percentage of doctor in east meria city is less then people may have home made remedies for curing from cold.So author made strong consideration that by eating substantial amount of fish can clearly prevents cold. there are other several factors which may taken into consideration.
peoples have maintain their health, doing exercise, mostly their fit. eating an substantial amount of fish will not prevent from cold, it might possibly that sudden change in
environment may cause some one to be cold.
Secondly, author had strong point, that cold are reason for the absence of school and work. so by an consumption of sufficient amount of fish the attendance level improve.
is only an cold for someone to take leave? There are other reason which may take person or student to take leave. Before taking into implementation whether has an data of attendance shows that those who eat an fish have less cold and not take leave?
Lastly, author recommend that daily use of a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil as a good way to prenvent cold and lower absenteeism.Is any further scientific data shows that nutrition from fish are good for health of person. again there are different types of fish from which nutritional supplement of fish oil is good for health of person.
To sum up with that, memo appeared in west meria public heath council. and this situation compelled with east meria, so difference in people, environment may take into an consideration before implementing. There are question need to be answered by author to strengthen the given argument.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 14 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 392 350
No. of Characters: 1875 1500
No. of Different Words: 175 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.45 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.783 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.536 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 120 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.795 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.381 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.631 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.106 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...eria public health council. Author made an conclusion that daily use of nutritiona...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Study
...given memo before it improve. Firstly,Study shows that consumption of fish is very ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...that east meria location, whether it is an located at sea side? If east meria loca...
^^
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...isit doctors only ones or twice in year.If an percentage of doctor in east meria c...
^^
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t doctors only ones or twice in year.If an percentage of doctor in east meria city...
^^
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ge of doctor in east meria city is less then people may have home made remedies for ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...home made remedies for curing from cold.So author made strong consideration that b...
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Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ount of fish can clearly prevents cold. there are other several factors which may tak...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 635, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'take' or 'be taken'?
Suggestion: take; be taken
...ere are other several factors which may taken into consideration. peoples have maint...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Peoples
...rs which may taken into consideration. peoples have maintain their health, doing exerc...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
...taken into consideration. peoples have maintain their health, doing exercise, mostly th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Eating
...alth, doing exercise, mostly their fit. eating an substantial amount of fish will not ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...oing exercise, mostly their fit. eating an substantial amount of fish will not pre...
^^
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'might', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: might; possibly
... of fish will not prevent from cold, it might possibly that sudden change in environment may ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'might'.
Suggestion: might
... of fish will not prevent from cold, it might possibly that sudden change in environment may ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...sudden change in environment may cause some one to be cold. Secondly, author had st...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...son for the absence of school and work. so by an consumption of sufficient amount ...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...r the absence of school and work. so by an consumption of sufficient amount of fis...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
...of fish the attendance level improve. is only an cold for someone to take leave?...
^^
Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...the attendance level improve. is only an cold for someone to take leave? There a...
^^
Line 8, column 161, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... taking into implementation whether has an data of attendance shows that those who...
^^
Line 8, column 208, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... of attendance shows that those who eat an fish have less cold and not take leave?...
^^
Line 10, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Is
... to prenvent cold and lower absenteeism.Is any further scientific data shows that...
^^
Line 10, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...senteeism.Is any further scientific data shows that nutrition from fish are good ...
^^
Line 10, column 238, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Again
...rom fish are good for health of person. again there are different types of fish from ...
^^^^^
Line 12, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...red in west meria public heath council. and this situation compelled with east meri...
^^^
Line 12, column 169, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ce in people, environment may take into an consideration before implementing. Ther...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 55.5748502994 103% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 16.3942115768 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 388.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98453608247 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65531970058 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463917525773 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 705.55239521 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 71.2018258193 57.8364921388 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7 119.503703932 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 23.324526521 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.70786347227 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 5.15768463074 155% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.25449101796 514% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196740858287 0.218282227539 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627804838125 0.0743258471296 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859425097897 0.0701772020484 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801287144015 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851822067154 0.0628817314937 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 98.500998004 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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