An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
It is extrapolated from the argument that the impoverished nation of Tagus are poor in vitamin A. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should pay subsidies for has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. In order to evaluated this recommendation validity, there are some question need to be answered.
For instance, it need to be answered if this breed of new millet type rich with vitamin recommendation is applied in another city and what is the extend of it's application results. Perhaps this new breed is rich with vitamin A but have bad taste so the people will not be willing to feed on it. it need also to be clarified what is the sample of tests that is done in Tagus to grantee the success of this problem solution by this recommendation.Might be a high percent of problem is solved by this new breed solution.
Moreover, it should be demonstrated What is the other possible ways to solve this problem of lack of vitamin A of Tagus people. Maybe there is another cheaper ways which would lead to the same results or even better results than new millet breed solution. This cheaper ways would guide the government resources to solve another problems properly and enhance Tagus society.
In addition, the answer of how much would the government support the farmers financially? Perhaps it is a big bunch of money that is not available for the government as the current period of time for some existing economical reasons. it is also need to be provided an explanation about what is the agriculture methods that is need to plant the new type millet.Perhaps the required method is not available for the farmers or may need a higher level complicated Technics that the local Tagus farmers are not familiar and would need long period of time to acquire this specific new Technics. Thus, this recommendation would be invalidated.
Thus, it is needed to answer a set of questions in order to properly evaluate weather the new millet breed would combat vitamin A deficiency of Tagus.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 352 350
No. of Characters: 1641 1500
No. of Different Words: 155 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.331 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.662 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.658 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 35.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 25.119 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.417 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.706 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.137 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...are some question need to be answered. For instance, it need to be answered if ...
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... is applied in another city and what is the extend of its application results. Perhaps thi...
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...aps this new breed is rich with vitamin A but have bad taste so the people will not b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 2260.96107784 74% => OK
No of words: 350.0 441.139720559 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76857142857 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.844728745 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448571428571 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 705.55239521 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1529324478 57.8364921388 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.214285714 119.503703932 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.324526521 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 5.70786347227 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402030815513 0.218282227539 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151042527085 0.0743258471296 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958961804588 0.0701772020484 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249471005047 0.128457276422 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853969178745 0.0628817314937 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.3799401198 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.3550499002 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 98.500998004 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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