Pirouettes Ballet School is the clear choice for any child. Of all the dance schools in Elmtown, Pirouettes has the most intensive program, and our teachers have danced in the most prestigious ballet companies all over the world. Many of our students have gone on to become professional dancers with top dance companies.
The statement states that Piroulettes Ballet School is clear choice for any child because of its intense curriculum, qualified teachers and current alumni's achievements.
I do not agree with the statement that Piroulettes Ballet School is the clear choice due to lack of data given. It says that it has intensive program but they enrol children and not all children can handle pressure. Children need time and freedom to excel in a field. constant pressure can ruin their childhood and make them loathe their parents.
If the teachers have been former ballet dancers in a prestigious ballet companies then the question is why did they leave. If they left after retirement then do they have what it takes to teach children. There is a difference between being a dancer and being a teacher. It states that many students have become professional dancers in a top dancing companies the major concern is what percent it is from those who were enrolled in the beginning.
Without considering all those above data and the data from the other school we cannot consider Piroulettes Ballet School as the clear choice.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: They might have monotonus delivery of speech that people get bored of listening.
Error: monotonus Suggestion: monotonous
Sentence: Addition of weather and local news might be the right line to get back the local business as advertisment investors but it does not necessary means that the viewership would increase.
Error: advertisment Suggestion: advertisement
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 259 350
No. of Characters: 1195 1500
No. of Different Words: 139 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.012 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.614 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.346 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.182 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.334 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.619 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.099 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...te. As the grades are so important in a students life, I disagree to the fact that stude...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... has their own domain where they excel. If a unanimous curriculum is established i...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: An
...iculum to all might not help them do so.An artist might be forced to give up their...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ced to give up their dream because they couldnt handle academic pressure. Children have...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...their imagination. It would also make a students life stressful and would hinder their s...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
...ifficulties in passing. Therefore, a schools curriculum should have flexibility to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 258.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98062015504 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64644680057 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4206468352 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302898153736 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103952822053 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129536320679 0.0758088955206 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169616883262 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100838214981 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.