The author of WWAC radio station suggests that to contain their fame as previous, changing its current music format because most of the listeners are retired person who do not like rock music. As another local radio station that increased its popularity in this area might be followed their strategy by WWAC radio to reverse declination. However, it seems plausible to bolster author side, careful scrutiny must reveal its logical flaws and ill-terminology.
First of all, population growth in this area mainly happens for retirement person who shifted here belonging the rest of their life. To avoid declinig listeners, radio owners will change their rock music programs to their tastes. In that case, only music format changes may not recap their listerners. At first , it must be ensure that what they actually like as a radio programme. Perhaps they do not like radio to pass their leisure time, it is more comfortable gardening to them instead of listening radio. Waching TV should effect radio programmes.
Secondly, following another local radio's strategy which is increased its popularity in that area by changing their programm with a news and talk shows, WWAC can recover their loss they think. But it is not clear that by eliminating which programms, they have added these? Probably it is not music program, may be its reality shows. Any other business strategy like marketing their subscribers may help for their popularity or the good connection, strong signals helps them to achieve good reputations. Author should ensure that not only their program but also their frequency is also good to provide a strong connection. No other trouble is there to capture their listeners.
Lastly, local sales of music never indicate that listeners are not interested in music. Perhaps in that shops collections are not good or lack of varities music what customers actually wants. Customers may go another shops which is popular in that area since long time. So, habitually cutomers go their and collect their favorite one. Only seeing just one shop's condition never extrapolate the whole scenario as well public interesrt.
To bolster author side, it must be cleared all issues which discussed above. Only coping other strategy may be create a false expression to cutomers. Searching actual valid reason for declination and recover them first makes more customers and selective program, good signal, marketing policy, subscriptions costs all issues are erelated here to gain profit.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 400 350
No. of Characters: 2039 1500
No. of Different Words: 212 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.472 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.098 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.461 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 143 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 109 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.391 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.076 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.696 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.279 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.49 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.093 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ired person who do not like rock music. As another local radio station that increa...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...may not recap their listerners. At first , it must be ensure that what they actual...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'radios'' or 'radio's'?
Suggestion: radios'; radio's
.... Secondly, following another local radios strategy which is increased its popular...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 28.8173652695 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 2260.96107784 93% => OK
No of words: 400.0 441.139720559 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2375 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54845517709 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 204.123752495 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0761677282 57.8364921388 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0869565217 119.503703932 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3913043478 23.324526521 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08695652174 5.70786347227 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.20758483034 183% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140855595091 0.218282227539 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433369806799 0.0743258471296 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453333703788 0.0701772020484 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841787880477 0.128457276422 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505049712198 0.0628817314937 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.3799401198 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.3550499002 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 98.500998004 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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