Of the two leading real estate firms in our town — Adams Realty and Fitch Realty — Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
In the statement the author stated that a comparison between two real estate firm Adams & Fitch Realty where he claims Adams is incredible by showing the the issue that it has lambast number of real estate agent & revenue than the other company Fitch. According his ten year ago exacerbate experience , selling a home quickly & at good price he suggest to choose Adams Realty. However , the claim is failed to provide enough evidence to crystalize situation. As he compared ten years ago Fitch condition with present time adams condition but the it does not give a articulate picture about what ten years ago Adams condition was or what nowadays fitch condition is. Besides though Adams has more real estate agent & earn last year more revenue than Fitch it does not germane with the issue the selling price quickly and good price. In order that the argument can be considered as incomplete and unwarranted.
Firstly, the author demonstrate a example where he listed his house in Fitch ten years ago & it took four months time to sell. But he did not mention any state about that time Adam’s status. It can be happened on that times Adams had a worst time in their business & if he listed his house to Adams it would take more time to sell. After that he compared with recent times Adams listed his house took time to sale for one month again he did not mention here any status of fitch. It can be happened fitch took less time now to sell a house. When time change everything change ,so business also can be changed. So comparing two times house selling period does not hold any solid evidence ground.
Secondly, It compare two companies real estate agent where Adams has almost double comparing to Fitch. Moreover, Adam’s agent are fixed where Fitch’s many workers are part timer. Though this evidence looks stronger for Adam’s side it can be also divided. Here the author does not mention any efficiency of the agents. It can be happened Fitch agents are more efficient that Adams & that’s why they need less agents. So this evidence also quite incomplete.
Lastly, the author try to compare last revenue with present year revenue which again crestfallen due to cause two times period anything can not be easily compared. Though last year Adams revenue was double than Fitch it does not mean this year fitch revenue also will be downfallen. Additionally, last year fitch’s home sales was 24000 dollar less than Adam’s which does not mean this year there home sales will also be less than Adam’s.
In extrapolation , it can be sated that though the evidence provide by the author look allusive but in exegesis it don’t have any bolster evidence.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 458 350
No. of Characters: 2137 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.626 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.666 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.167 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 135 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.515 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.347 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.347 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.163 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...e claims Adams is incredible by showing the the issue that it has lambast number of rea...
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Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...e claims Adams is incredible by showing the the issue that it has lambast number of rea...
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Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lambasted'.
Suggestion: lambasted
...le by showing the the issue that it has lambast number of real estate agent & revenue t...
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Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mber of real estate agent & revenue than the other company Fitch. According his t...
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Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h. According his ten year ago exacerbate experience , selling a home quickly & at...
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Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... his ten year ago exacerbate experience , selling a home quickly & at good price ...
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Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest choosing'.
Suggestion: suggest choosing
...lling a home quickly & at good price he suggest to choose Adams Realty. However , the claim is fa...
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Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...lling a home quickly & at good price he suggest to choose Adams Realty. However , the c...
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Line 1, column 387, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... suggest to choose Adams Realty. However , the claim is failed to provide enough e...
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Line 1, column 476, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to crystalize situation. As he compared ten years ago Fitch condition with prese...
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Line 1, column 546, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...n with present time adams condition but the it does not give a articulate picture abou...
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Line 1, column 567, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...dams condition but the it does not give a articulate picture about what ten years...
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Line 1, column 632, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t what ten years ago Adams condition was or what nowadays fitch condition is. Bes...
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Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nted. Firstly, the author demonstrate a example where he listed his house in F...
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Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted. Firstly, the author demonstrate a example where he listed his house in Fit...
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Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...can be happened on that times Adams had a worst time in their business & if he li...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...would take more time to sell. After that he compared with recent times Adams list...
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Line 2, column 583, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ouse. When time change everything change ,so business also can be changed. So comp...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'compares'?
Suggestion: compares
...ny solid evidence ground. Secondly, It compare two companies real estate agent where A...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ned Fitch agents are more efficient that Adams & that's why they need less a...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun agents is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...that Adams & that's why they need less agents. So this evidence also quite inc...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...od anything can not be easily compared. Though last year Adams revenue was double than...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r Adams revenue was double than Fitch it does not mean this year fitch revenue al...
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Line 4, column 342, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
... year fitch's home sales was 24000 dollar less than Adam's which does not me...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...less than Adam's. In extrapolation , it can be sated that though the evidenc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 28.8173652695 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2232.0 2260.96107784 99% => OK
No of words: 457.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88402625821 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43355266229 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 204.123752495 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439824945295 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 705.55239521 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.340665112 57.8364921388 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0434782609 119.503703932 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8695652174 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04347826087 5.70786347227 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.25449101796 476% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.67664670659 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35079053207 0.218282227539 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112560106349 0.0743258471296 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964788082908 0.0701772020484 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192754487594 0.128457276422 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114254190952 0.0628817314937 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.3799401198 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 98.500998004 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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