Arugument type - A recently issued twenty-year study on headaches suffered by the residents of Mentia investigated the possible therapeutic effect of consuming salicylates. Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin, a medicine used to
A recently issued twenty-year study on headaches suffered by the residents of Mentia investigated the possible therapeutic effect of consuming salicylates. Salicylates are members of the same chemical family as aspirin, a medicine used to treat headaches. Although many foods are naturally rich in salicylates, food-processing companies also add salicylates to foods as preservatives. The twenty-year study found a correlation between the rise in the commercial use of salicylates and a steady decline in the average number of headaches reported by study participants. At the time when the study conc...
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Sentence: Although salicylates may be similar to aspirin in some chemical properties, these two medicines can still differ in medical use, just as graphite and diamond, which subordinate to the carbon family but have different physical properties and are applied to distinctive use.
Description: The fragment which subordinate to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace subordinate with subordinates
Sentence: Without ruling all these possibilities, the author cannot convince me that the salicylates are the right treatment for headaches.
Description: The fragment the right treatment is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: Firstly, since many food have already contained salicylates, the researcher should conduct the experiment on two groups of people, one group have salicylate-contained food while the other have food containing no salicylates at all.
Error: salicylate-contained Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: For one thing, many foods are naturally rich in salicylates as the author mentioned; for the other thing, it is quite possible that a slight amount of salicylates may work properly on headaches, while the overdose of salicylates may create undesirable side-effect on human body.
Error: side-effect Suggestion: side effect
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 - 5.5 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 453 350
No. of Characters: 2438 1500
No. of Different Words: 220 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.613 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.382 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.003 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 189 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 148 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 113 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 81 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.436 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.34 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.553 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.075 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5