Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
The preservance of wilderness is same as to preserve our posterity and environment. The issues of global warming, pollution and fresh air are becoming grave and require contribution from every part of the world. However, to get an economic advantage of these wilderness then it should be developed separately and not to distrub the natural and biological developed area. Therefore, the agreement with statement is subjective and based on qualifications.
The ecnomic growth of any nation has become the priority. The industry revolution started from europe has resulted in many gaint factories. These factories generates and releases enormous amount of pollution in form of gas and solid waste. Since the industrial revolution has identified many solution of problems but still struggling to cope up with recycling of industrial waste. The only security so far the world has that manages and contributes toward the recycling process is the wilderness area. The poisonous gases when released by industries, the forestery system partially observse it and make the environment clean. One could imagine the adverse impacts that would happen once these wilderness areas are no more availble. In current era, industrial nations are coping with many disease like lung cancer, asthema, alergic problem etc. These diseases would become the fatal for entire nation. Every industrial nation should preserve their wilderness by making law with stong enforcement of it that is in line with about statement.
The scientific research on medicine has achieved great results. These research has produced many medicine that has cured chronic deseases. These medicine are made from ancient plants and due to forestory area. The coughing syrup is made up of Honey. Pure honey can not be acquired without forest and trees. The asthematic medicines are made up of leaves and other materials. In recent history, the numerous deseases have been found like cancer, aids etc. Scientists has also approaching and researching on plants in order to find out curing medicine. The ecological system of the world bounds nations to protect their wilderness area. The seasonal migration of birds or matter of sustaining diminishing animal growth of tigers and panda forced us to protect wild life. In view of these scenario, it is essential to protect wilderness that would help scientists to produce life saving mediciens and wild life to grow further.
However, the develped space of wilderness for economic growth should properly organized and get advantage of it. These additional areas should be considered for production of variety of things like wood, oil etc. These grown areas would also help to overcome environmental issues. There is no harm to take advantage of developed green area. One could hardly find the the replacement of wood and oil. On other hand, it is also source of cheap energy for rural areas.
Conclusively, The law to prevent and preserve wilderness should be made and enforced strongly. There should be a global law making body for preservation of wilderness that compel nations to protect their forest. However, Nations could develop wilderness area in order to get economic advantage.
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