Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Any great idea or novel thought has never been accepted by the world when it was first introduced yet they withstand the test and now are regarded as the axioms. We have almost unending examples of great scientist being persecuted and in some case prosecuted when they introduced a novel and brilliant idea. The likes of Galileo, Sir Issac Newton, Einstein all were looked upon with contempt even among fellow scientist, yet they survived the sands of time and are now regarded as the best scientist ever known.
People have a tendency to live in comfortable fabric created around and do not tend ...
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Sentence: It might surprising for few that now considered a commonplace thought that our earth is round and Sun is the centre of solar system, back in 14th century Church used to prosecute people with such ideas.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to might and surprising
Sentence: If they would have deigned to churches tyranny then certainly this fact would have taken a toll and who knows what how are recent history might have shaped.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to churches and tyranny
Sentence: It is also noteworthy to mention here that Ideas or works that are readily acceptable do not make an impact as it a continuation of the previous accepted norms and gets lost over the period of time due to lacking originality.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb 'to do', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to acceptable and do
Description: The tag a pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a
Suggestion: Refer to it and a
Sentence: But neverthe less their ideas and persistence never goes in vain and one they world do remember them.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to they and world
Sentence: It also true that ideas or work just from the point of orignality may also not weather well if it does not have the content or substance.
Error: orignality Suggestion: originality
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 521 350
No. of Characters: 2300 1500
No. of Different Words: 267 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.778 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.415 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.384 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 138 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.944 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.207 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.289 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.497 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5