In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Most of the people now a days are working a corporations whether it's domestic corportation or multinational corporation. The topic raises a controversial issue that whether the corporations should take the responsibility of caring environment or they should only focus on making as much money as possible. Indisputably, many corporation uses various kinds of machines and chemicals which can destroy the nature and thus cause a great effect to humans living that area. Nevertheless, it their duty to take care of the environment and the nearby societies instead of only focussing on money.
First of all the cooperations which works on chemical and mechanical departments should be as far away from the city area as possible. Since the smoke evolving from the chimneys of those corporations can harm not only the environment, but can cause great destruction to humans as well in the form of lung diseases like synus. Furthermore, the chemical used in a factory can cause a serious damange to not only humans but animals and birds as well if it's near any river or lake. For example, the sulphur fumes evoking from factories can cause a serious damage to insects and fishes in a nearby river. Thus, the construction of such corporations should done in a village or an area where the strength of people living nearby should be low.
Secondly, the smoke and various gases coming out of corporative factories can cause serious diseases to people living near those factories and even the people who are working in that factory. The harmful gases like Methyl Isocynide used in a factory could cause numerous diseases to people. Like for instance, the gas tragedy happens in Bhopal, a small city in India, has caused a great destruction to human lives after the leakage of Methy Isocynide in a nearby factory. Hence, proper equipments and technologies should be used in order to avoid such careless mistakes which causes destruction to not only environment but humans life as well.
Although, most of the corporations doesn't think according to environmental aspects or well being of a society. They only focuses on making as much money as possible. But this should not be the mere responbility of an industry or corporation. There are various successful corporation which are making a lot of money and even after taking care of the environmental aspects as well. For example, a huge German company Vokswagan, creating various models of cars, had never undergone any tragedy regarding human lives and environment since their development centers are far from city and they use high tech machines which doesn't cause any destruction to nearby environment and societies. Therefore, a corporation should consider all aspects of humans life and environment irrespective of only making money.
In conclusion, although all corporations wants to make money, they should also consider to manage the environment and nearby societies so that it won't get impacted from their development. The corporation can achieve this by limiting the use of old machines and creating their development centers far away from cities as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
Most of the people now a days are working a corporations whether its ...
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Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Most of the people now a days are working a corporations whether its ...
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Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a corporation' or simply 'corporations'?
Suggestion: a corporation; corporations
...st of the people now a days are working a corporations whether its domestic corportation or mu...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'serious damage'.
Suggestion: serious damage
... fumes evoking from factories can cause a serious damage to insects and fishes in a nearby river...
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Line 3, column 652, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have done' or 'do'?
Suggestion: have done; do
...onstruction of such corporations should done in a village or an area where the stren...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
.... Although, most of the corporations doesnt think according to environmental aspect...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'corporations'?
Suggestion: corporations
...rporation. There are various successful corporation which are making a lot of money and eve...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...y and they use high tech machines which doesnt cause any destruction to nearby environ...
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Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider managing'.
Suggestion: consider managing
...s wants to make money, they should also consider to manage the environment and nearby societies so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2613.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 507.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91849105386 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435897435897 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 833.4 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5527720945 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.428571429 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90476190476 5.21951772744 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0778733976778 0.243740707755 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270514648647 0.0831039109588 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270238513343 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503715222068 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188841665475 0.0667264976115 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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