All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
I disagree that all parents should be required to volunteer their time to their children’s schools for the following reasons.
Allocating time to your ward’s school is completely voluntary. It was perhaps because parents couldn’t find time to educate their children at home they sent their children to schools in the first place! Thus, entrusting teachers to do a job and then contributing your own time to it additionally would be redundant today, where we all are so pressed for time.
Moreover, parents of different children would be engaged in professions which are extremely demanding. It is plausible that their jobs don’t allow them to see their children even at home let alone be volunteering time to school or any other activity. For instance, physicians, investment bankers, IT professionals, business executives are some professions who work around the clock. They would find it difficult to allocate time due to their work schedules. I remember, when I was school, my parents tried hard to not miss any open houses and they often failed.
This leads me to another point, if a certain activity is voluntary then it cannot be made compulsory. For instance, choosing how to spend one’s time is his/ her prerogative. Thus, making it mandatory for all will not really help in spirit. Some parents would really try and be involved in the school work while the other who aren’t interested would take any lead. Such an arrangement wouldn’t necessarily help.
However, I concede that parents, if they are able to devote sometime to forums like parent teacher meetings and open houses will increase the accountability of the school board, amd teachers too, in improving education. With the help of technology, today the parents can be involved with the school and teachers in ways that don’t require physical presence, virtual interaction would suffice. The parents can be connected with the teachers over social media platforms and monitor their child’s progress.
With technology at disposal, I dont think it is necessary for the parents to be volunteer their time to school when they can virtually connect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2774566474 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93735477239 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554913294798 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8120935887 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.411764706 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236639334448 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880416555212 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808892195896 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162891039755 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761980277875 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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