In this essay we need to balcance the importance between the amatur and expert that who would contribute more on any study area. The eassay asserted it is the begginer will make more contribution while I don't agree with it partly. In m opinion, and of the two people groups should not be ignored when thet are delve into research. Because there is no frame limited to the research area, we need to discuss this situation in part to prove my view.
First of all, the expert is professional at his research filed that the begginer cannot compete with. With this excellence, the expert will solve more problems in the professional area where the begginer must study from the basical knowledge. With the guidence of the expert , the begginer will go on with learing an researching. With the revision by the expert, the begginer will recognize where he was wrong and corrects it. So it is more likely the professor win the contribution to the area.
Secondly, no one born as Experts, they are also from the very bggining of the research.As begginers , who will study at the cerntain area first, is standing outside the door of the research filed. However, with the passion and interest ,he may surprise ths field by the deep studying. The expert , on the other hand , may be limited by the professional perception which may narrow down his scope of the view of the world. Almost every successful experts, who were also amaturs , surpassed their tutors as experts.
As my opinion, in any filed , we could not overlook any contribution of the people no matter how professional they are. Even the outsider can shock the scientific area. For example, once the NASA wanted to invent a kind of pen using in the space shuttle where there is no gravity and expensive supplement. The pen should be invetnted as selfperpetuating without refill of ink and waste. This "simple and difficult" trouble made the experts confounded for a long time until they asked help for the society as an advertisment on newpaper. Then they got correspondence from little kid and he said:" Have you tried pencil?" This story tells us that the scientific research should not be constrained in particular point as it could make the people on the research puzzled whoever they are.
In conclusion ,I belive that in any filed ,the expert are professional, but we cannot ignore the importance of begginer who may also contribute to the scientific area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8843373494 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78019346191 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522891566265 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7977296458 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.35 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14318845024 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439321642653 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316875566288 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077506685908 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212632205168 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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