What is the best way to succeed in any field? Cooperating and collaborating with people, right? It enhances our vision and we get to the zenith of our forte. The prompt suggests that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in any field is to make them understand the value of cooperation and not competition. In my opinion, I mostly agree to this claim for several reasons. Yes for obvious reasons there are some exceptions that will challenge my support and it is cogent to address those too.
To begin with, people who are good with collaborating with each other are more likely to succeed. In this competing world, everyone possess some unique skills and when you cooperate with each other, you strive to learn those things and get better at it knowingly or unknowingly. Let's say for example the two biggest tech giant of the world- Apple and Samsung, both the companies are at the pinnacle of tech field but still they cooperate with each other as Samsung provides their camera and OLED's to Apple and Apple helps the former one for security purposes. So cooperating really helps if one is able to see the bigger picture.
In addition to this, from childhood one is taught is to compete with others and get ahead of them. This competeting behaviour which is inculcated in every human makes them to go far away from the learning process. Instead, if young people are taught to learn things from people who are better than you at something, one will be able to expand his or her horizon to the greatest level. For instance, This pandemic was the greatest example of cooperation and making things work as number of scientist and doctors worked together on vaccine and foiled the virus by producing vaccine.
In contrast to my other two points, yes I believe there are some exceptions which will challenge my positions and I respect those exceptions. Like, it is equally true competition challenges us and make us better in what we do. It is the competition which allows one to think about innovative ideas to get ahead of in this competiting world. So yes, when you compete, you give it everything in the process and thrive for the success. This passion and zeal to get work done make things possible and healthy competetion surely is one of the good aspect of it.
So to sum up my point, as I said earlier I mostly agree to the cooperating and collaborating part with each other to get better and work in harmonius manner but at the same time there are exceptions which challenges it and it's plausible to respect that and work in required manner to get success in life or for that matter in any field we work and thrive for the best.
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead jobs 54
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers 58
- Men and women because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks 66
- The main objective of education is to procure a job 70
- Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...spread and people were inclined to see. If the argument could have provided the nu...
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Line 7, column 380, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
... not watch the produced movied does not means they were not aware of the movies, ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, really, so, still, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2266.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04677060134 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6566636626 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47438752784 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0555751019 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.3 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.45 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0795190746939 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277933552928 0.0831039109588 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262439359049 0.0758088955206 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0494267115521 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211092670625 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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