Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
any field needs a prodigious, experienced and foresighted person to build the foundation. it is also true that the new comer are energetic as well as well to do mentality. there is massive contribution of youth and newcomer in the efficacy of the field is inevitable. however, in my opinion, the claim that in any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years as it is the surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership, is not applied in every case. there mainly three reasons to disapprove the following claim as it lies in the base of somewhat over generalization.
To begin, it is not sure that in every field requires the newcomer to make success that field. perhaps, it is true that the new leadership is necessary and the purpose dclaim can be justified. however, the claim cannot be applied uin any field. In instance, in the field of education, it is not necessarily that the leadership should be replaced after sometimes to improve the efficiency of the education system. Instead that seasoned leadership is very neccessary in the field to make the education system more effective as he has experience and vision in the related field and he know better than anybody else whcih is best for the system. thus, the reasons for the claim unable to consider that fact and it becomes little bit redundant while judging the claim.
Similarly, there are many paragon that the field becomes succesful as does claim suggest, however, it is also prevalent in the world that the veterate person has good success rate in any related field. As the claim suggests that every person should be abdicated fron their position after sometimes and naive should give chance to give enterprise success,, but, it has been proved that the seasoned person also can ensure success even after their long spell. In instance, In usa there were economic downfall in the 2008 and the new president was elected Mr. Barack obama. he executed good paln to overcome these all financial malfunction in the usa. His reign equally effective after five years when he had been re elected as the president of the usa. thus, the reason on which the claim based is insubstantial.
Again, there is biggest question that the claim doesnot hold to account that what if there is no effective and diligent newcomer who has capacity to ensure the success. perhaps, they are still juvenile in the field and direct power and responsibility can only can cause loss in the filed. In insatnce, the newcomer may not have ability to run the big company and their invovemnt can only cause fibancial losses to the company. may be better to give the long trail to how to run certain institute rather than direct power. thus, the reason on which the claim based is insubstantial.
In conclusion, the claim that In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years on lying reason thatsurest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership is insubsatntial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Any
any field needs a prodigious, experienced a...
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Suggestion: It
...sighted person to build the foundation. it is also true that the new comer are ene...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: NEW_COMER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newcomer'?
Suggestion: newcomer
...he foundation. it is also true that the new comer are energetic as well as well to do men...
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Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'as well'.
Suggestion: as well
...o true that the new comer are energetic as well as well to do mentality. there is massive contr...
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Suggestion: There
...rgetic as well as well to do mentality. there is massive contribution of youth and ne...
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Suggestion: However
...he efficacy of the field is inevitable. however, in my opinion, the claim that in any f...
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Suggestion:
...ould step down after five years as it is the surest path to success for any enter...
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...adership, is not applied in every case. there mainly three reasons to disapprove the ...
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Suggestion: Perhaps
...he newcomer to make success that field. perhaps, it is true that the new leadership is ...
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...nd the purpose dclaim can be justified. however, the claim cannot be applied uin any fi...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...the efficiency of the education system. Instead that seasoned leadership is very necces...
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Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
... and vision in the related field and he know better than anybody else whcih is best ...
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Suggestion: Thus
...body else whcih is best for the system. thus, the reasons for the claim unable to co...
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...le to consider that fact and it becomes little bit redundant while judging the claim. Si...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun paragon seems to be countable; consider using: 'many paragons'.
Suggestion: many paragons
...dging the claim. Similarly, there are many paragon that the field becomes succesful as doe...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'paragons'?
Suggestion: paragons
... the claim. Similarly, there are many paragon that the field becomes succesful as doe...
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Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
...d give chance to give enterprise success,, but, it has been proved that the season...
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Suggestion: He
...president was elected Mr. Barack obama. he executed good paln to overcome these al...
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Suggestion: Thus
...re elected as the president of the usa. thus, the reason on which the claim based is...
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Suggestion: is the biggest
... based is insubstantial. Again, there is biggest question that the claim doesnot hold to...
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Suggestion: Perhaps
...who has capacity to ensure the success. perhaps, they are still juvenile in the field a...
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Suggestion: May
... cause fibancial losses to the company. may be better to give the long trail to how...
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Suggestion: Thus
...ain institute rather than direct power. thus, the reason on which the claim based is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, still, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2571.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 516.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98255813953 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89350560861 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436046511628 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 813.6 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8596778345 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.782608696 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4347826087 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30434782609 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457617926859 0.243740707755 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122277449389 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169579475608 0.0758088955206 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320227608658 0.150359130593 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.21605253307 0.0667264976115 324% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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