A democratic government is for the people, of the people and by the people. People elect their representatives who will voice their concerns in the parliament in various bills and legislation. These representatives represent the views of their constituents and their own knowledge for taking decisions on their behalf. The opinion of every citizen cannot be incorporated for every major policy decision. It is the job of the people to vote for the most capable person at the ballot. People should carefully consider the person's attitude, ethics and ideals, principles, ulterior motives and lobbying interests with corporates and make an informed decision before voting for their representative. Every policy decision taken in parliament affects the lives of millions of people in the country. It would not be possible to get an agreement with the majority of the population every time a new policy or bill has to be passed.
Government experts have access to information and background knowledge to the issues they are dealing with for many years. To expect for common people to understand all the intricacies of every policy decision is quixotic. The people in democracies can, however, show their support or dissent for a decision in other ways, by using rallies, protests, online petitions and participating in open debates.
Many major decisions may have to be carried out in a spur of the moment when the consent of every citizen cannot be incorporated. Taking some policy decisions may require confidential information which may be of importance to national security and decades of experience with matters at hand. These decisions are better to be rested with experts and politicians individuals who run our country.
The government also need to consider various factors that would affect different subdivisions of the society and general welfare of everyone by long-term thinking that would be better for the society as a whole in the long-run. In case the decision for major policies are taken by a referendum, there can be disastrous consequences. Brexit has been on of the worst decisions of the United Kingdom which divided the country. The economic losses to the country will be enormous to the country after leaving the European Union. The decision was largely influenced by a campaign of misinformation, distortion of facts, inciting anger and fear of illegal immigrants and propaganda in social media. This shows that the general public can be easily fooled by individuals for their ulterior motives and they are not always capable for understanding every policy matter.
It is therefore important for people to carefully choose their representatives by doing a thorough analysis but not interfere in convoluted issues they apparently have no understanding about. In an idealistic society, it may be possible for the general public to be involved in every policy decision but present scenario does not confirm such a possibility.
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to addres 50
- The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette."The population on Balmer Island doubles during the summer months. During the summer, then, the town council of Balmer Island should decrease the maximum 63
- The following appeared as part of a business plan developed by the manager of the Rialto Movie Theater."Despite its downtown location, the Rialto Movie Theater, a local institution for five decades, must make big changes or close i 25
- The following appeared in a recommendation from the president of Amburg's Chamber of Commerce."Last October the city of Belleville installed high-intensity lighting in its central business district, and vandalism there declined wit 63
- The following appeared in a newsletter offering advice to investors."Over 80 percent of the respondents to a recent survey indicated a desire to reduce their intake of foods containing fats and cholesterol, and today low-fat produc 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 522, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...t. People should carefully consider the persons attitude, ethics and ideals, principles...
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Line 6, column 350, Rule ID: ON_OF_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
...isastrous consequences. Brexit has been on of the worst decisions of the United Ki...
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Line 6, column 714, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...da in social media. This shows that the general public can be easily fooled by individuals for...
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Line 8, column 246, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...tic society, it may be possible for the general public to be involved in every policy decision...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2484.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27388535032 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.981514685 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488322717622 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 804.6 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2386468164 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.909090909 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4090909091 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77272727273 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204913073691 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658192500525 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425189077767 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126970097095 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354233117224 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.