In the beginning there is no law at all, primitive human beings lived together as a tribe or relative families. Due to the development of human society, the legal system was invented to regulate people's behavior and protect them by the authority.Today in a democractic country, the comprehensive legal system would promise a hamonius society in a normal develmopment where everyone would feel safe and comfortable, while it is a hard endeavor for any country to get their laws complete and effective. Thus as some one says, which also I agree, the laws can not solve every problems in mordern society, not because the laws cannot change the people's minds, instead, this issue is full of the uncertainty of the more complicated future of human society and the role which the morality plays.
To begin with, there are lots of behaviors of people can be ruled by people, since by the protection of the law, people would not be afraid of being cheated in Business when they use the tools of law. Also, we are safer than before as the protetion of the laws which fight agianst crimes. In most public and private scences, the laws play an significant role as a symbol of order and civilization. Also there are more and more laws to be enacted when the new problems emerge. By the introducing of the Uber, the online taxi reserving service, there was no law to regulate this service which may disturb the traditional taxi service. As the new law enacted, the Uber can compete with the tradtional taxi sevice euqally, this is what all of the people want to see.
Admittedly, with the protection of the law, a country could develop on a right path. While there are also some problems which could not be sovled by laws perfectly. As the China is stepping into a country which most of the people are getting older and be older, more people need to be cared.Given that Chinese people value the tradition that the sons or daughters should take care of their parents as they are old, while the one child policy have a severer effect on people which one individual could not take care both of the parents as the growing economic pressure on him/her. the authority found it ist he time to enact a law to force the people take care of their parents. As thie propostion appeared, most of the people criticized this law which could not solve this problem at all. Taking care of the parents is the traditonal virtue of Chineses people while the rapid development of the society preclude the people to do this as the fast growing pressure on most of them with this development. This law could not change the people's mind or what's in their heart either, instead, there were more and more debate online nowadays.
In all, everyone in a democactic country want to make more progress no matter for oneself or the nation, while the laws have their role in the daily life. For sometime, as there is a publice affair which should be sovled by the Govenrment, it is a good advice to use the tools of the laws. While in some ocassion which is not suitable for taking laws to handle the problem which related to morality and ethic issues, the laws should keep his psotion and let the people to figure out other method to sovle the problem perfectly. Laws like computers which could handle problems which you hand in, while if the problems are nuanced, it would not work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2758.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 595.0 442.535393258 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63529411765 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93888872473 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43219235169 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442016806723 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 885.6 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.10617977528 354% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.9228856947 60.3974514979 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.9 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327566216999 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1139129784 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566899313677 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216145228678 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153244854698 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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