As faculty in high education institutes, in some occasions it is unnecessary for them to spend time working outside the professional world they are researching in. Because they are experts, professionals as well as the tutors in their area who will also teach the people who could be professors in the same area in the future. While sometimes they should learn something else besides their majors. I will address my view in three points.
To begin with, I believe the professional faculty should be the expert of their own major at first place. It is significant that they should know this premise clearly. On one hand, they are researching a certain area that nobody in some area else could do even comprehend. For example, you can not let a tutor in film editor major to research Quantum Mechanics, vice versa. So their concentration on the major would be the first productivity of the field. Moreover, on the other hand, their focusing on the studying field will set a good example to the students of his. That is, the professional faculty is not only experts but also teachers in the certain area, if he wonder some major else, he would not teach the major of himself well, their students could not learn well,likewise.
However, there are some majors which require the people studying in to look outside. Due to the rapid development of our society, the technology is evolving in every area at the speed that our predecessor could not imagine. Thus there are more and more inter-discipline courses which need the students who know both of the two or three majors well. So the new condition demands the faculty focus on the other area. Like Artificial Intelligence, there are requirements of students and teachers who can study computer science and anthropology as well as Philosophy sometimes. So here is the condition that the faculty in high education institution should spent time working in some other area, in order to catch up with the trend of the academic development. In addition, as tutors who teach arts especially film area and paint, I believe they should spend some time to feel the life around him as well as outside the environments he live in. Besides learning how to make films, the material of films comes from life instead of classes.
So whether the faculty in high education institutes should work outside the academic world depends on the majors he studying in. For pure science like Math or Chemistry, I believe they should focus on their own majors. While in some inter-discipline majors, it requires both teachers and students to learn something more than the single major. And for arts, this essay works as working outside sometimes is also the requirements of their majors some times like film editing.
In all , I agree with this essay partly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fessors in the same area in the future. While sometimes they should learn something e...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wonders'.
Suggestion: wonders
...lso teachers in the certain area, if he wonder some major else, he would not teach the...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , likewise
...ell, their students could not learn well,likewise. However, there are some majors whic...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...that our predecessor could not imagine. Thus there are more and more inter-disciplin...
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Message: “So whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... comes from life instead of classes. So whether the faculty in high education institute...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'studies'.
Suggestion: studies
...academic world depends on the majors he studying in. For pure science like Math or Chemi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... some times like film editing. In all , I agree with this essay partly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, likewise, look, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2317.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 474.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88818565401 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6941808637 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455696202532 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 724.5 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1505967722 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5416666667 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18520555064 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586625599512 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521799986834 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115973747387 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550708124572 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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