We all live in the society, where all kinds of people with different cast, religion, race and we have different cultures as well. Human species is the only one who is capable of communicating effectively.The prompt suggest that the controversial topics should not questioned with those people who have the contrasting opinion. I strongly disagree with this statement .
First of all , we all communicate with other people and share our idea and beliefs with others so that we can all discuss about the particular topic and come to decision . Without proper discussion and sharing individual idea how can we say that the particular decision or the belief is correct or wrong. Different people might have different opinion based on there past experience and it could be also true that number of year's worked in that particular field.
For example , let's say one of the young scientist made an invention in a particular field and claims that his research provide the optimal solution to the existing problem.So if no one share the opinion regarding this new invention it might get used in so many ways around the word without knowing the pros and cons of the usages.If some senior scientist who might have some inputs, question's or contrary theory about the invention or he might show some impact of the usage on the environment which might be alarming.
It is really important to discuss contrasting views and debate on it . it is completely okay when done in proper and healthy way , the goal should not be to change some one's core beliefs on particular thing or manipulate there mindset to a favorable view point. May be a good discussion or debate with the contrasting individual might lead to a new idea's and might change the perspective to think internally and realize there decision or stand point.
We all should respect each and every one's opinion, There is nothing wrong in discussing the views of individual , may be it varies based on there past experience and the way they deal the people and the culture. But coming to a conclusion that very few people will change there mind when we discuss or questioning some one about the core beliefs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, regarding, so, well, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87465940054 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64567159675 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50408719346 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.267382772 60.3974514979 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.083333333 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5833333333 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265574373737 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116590204502 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645022012178 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156347325387 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634485994215 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.