Politics is of fundamental importance of every individual that exists in this world. Similar to the essential things in our lives like water and air, politics has always been a part of an individual's life since their birth either directly or indirectly whether they know it or know. The behavior of politics can have an influence or impact on citizens and that impact may vary in magnitude which is why we should ensure that the goal of politics is correct and of good intentions.
It is easy for politicians to get carried away with fallacious ideals and exaggerated idealistic statements which could create a diatribe within a nation if certain groups are excluded from political welfare and if common ground is not met. It is important for politicians to be democratic and cater to all individuals in an economy. As Abraham Lincoln averred, "Democracy is for the people, of the people, and by the people". Politicians are elected by the common people with the expectations that those who are elected will consider the common people when making policy decisions.
Further, if the goal of politics was to be the pursuit of ideal, this could possibly lead to inefficient and poor policy decisions due to a lack of proper theoretical analysis or empirical evidence. For example, Policy makers of a less developing economies such as Sri Lanka have had idealistic views to make Sri Lanka the next fast-developing economy like Singapore in the past. Although it is good to be optimistic about a countries development, policies should be based on accurate and immutable facts. The policy makers idealistic goal on making sri lanka the next "Singapore" led to decades of poor policy making with little to no analysis such as making large investments on capital expenditure on tourist sites such as the Lotus tower rather than catering towards the large proportion of children who have been inured to the life of poverty.
Furthermore, a lack of common ground in policy goals may result in violence and uncertainty, For example, the lack of common ground in Sri Lanka between the people and policymakers led to immense violence over the past few months in the form of strikes, protest and finally the impeachment of the president. Hence if policymakers do not consider the search for common ground between them and its people and reasonable consensus, this may lead to uncertainty and dissonance among individuals.
However, it is also worth highlighting that it is not always feasible for politicians to identify a common ground when making policy decisions as there may never be one. There are many varying groups with different opinions and views hence it may be almost impossible for politicians to cater to all individuals and reach a common ground.
In conclusion, there are many factors to consider, however ultimately it is important for the goal of politics to not be the pursuit of an ideal, but rather the search for common ground and reasonable consensus.
1.Agree : common ground
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2528.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 497.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08651911469 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94927356224 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470824949698 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 809.1 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7960691404 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.705882353 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2352941176 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439698545113 0.243740707755 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147028647544 0.0831039109588 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141219603203 0.0758088955206 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247374935572 0.150359130593 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171976348017 0.0667264976115 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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