"Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in
order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved
and generated."
This topic upraises the controversial issue of whether Authority must focus primarily on majaor city or not.Indisputably, If major cities get every opportunities it need, then inevitably it's development and prosperity will also increase as well as as a nation's focal point it's importantce to international community will also increase.Nevertheless,Only the development of one can not make a nation overall idyllic with rtefuting the other cities develpment.Thus,I generally disagree with that only major cities augment will preserved nation's cultural and traditional trend and would concur that all the cities development need homogeneously.
First of all, If we consider only focusing the major cities then all the people of the country will try to reach to that city as it will have better employment facilities.I would like to point out that few city will be overplouplated if we consider the issue's opponion.To illustrate let us look at an paragon,as the major city in Bangladesh, Dhaka,chittagong overall polulation is higher than that the others,so accomodation facilities, overall environment and basic need to live properly is also lower in there as result of nation's treade and cultural center.In this circumstance it is inevitable that, environment also suffer for this outcome.consequentluy, it is pretty ineluctable that some cities will fall under over densed problem.
Furthermore, it will be naivetd only considering primary urbanaties.if we look at other cities we will find that they will face unemployment problem though they have enough land and man power unused. Specifically,immoral act will also increase in that place.so both shrewdness and savoir faire have told us that all the cities develoment must be ensured.
Admittedly, if only capital is developed then overall nation's develpment will occur,considering the division of cities as their trade and other considering prospect, like one city will be the center of administration another will be for trade, thoose cities have major historical intertest it can booked for tourism also.
In termination, fewllow citizen of a nation's will be develped if major and minor cities develoment is consideresd homogeneously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59580838323 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61000503132 2.79657885939 129% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541916167665 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 23.0359550562 239% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 240.216337681 60.3974514979 398% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 311.5 118.986275619 262% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.6666666667 23.4991977007 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.21951772744 307% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248420361789 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141219957623 0.0831039109588 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661222728303 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159011813275 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594544357752 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.8 14.1392134831 232% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.27 48.8420337079 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 12.1743820225 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 12.1639044944 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.38706741573 128% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.0 11.8971910112 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 11.2143820225 214% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.