Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.

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Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...n it is also important to invest in art so as to create a sense of happiness. Second rea...
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Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...ason, this investment would help grow a nations economy as most paintings or art work t...
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Line 1, column 499, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...more creative and diverse in their views . First reason, while safety is nece...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...n it is also important to invest in art so as to create a sense of elation among the peo...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ate a sense of elation among the people.This can explained by saying that, it is not...
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Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...the investment in art would help grow a nations economy as most paintings or art work t...
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Line 9, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Keeping
...ns which in turn helps in economy boost.Keeping this as a minimum profit from art, it m...
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Line 9, column 361, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est more in art so that more art is sold and in turn would help the nations econo...
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Line 9, column 390, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...art is sold and in turn would help the nations economy. Third reason, investment ...
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Line 13, column 306, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...uld be one of the many ways to keep the nations mindset at ease. Therefore , it is...
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Line 17, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... nations mindset at ease. Therefore , it is necessary that governments should...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, therefore, third, while, as to, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 314.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56687898089 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56346303534 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410828025478 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.1763519555 60.3974514979 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.363636364 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321142811038 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187376064739 0.0831039109588 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.234733457753 0.0758088955206 310% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287339192841 0.150359130593 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.284430061361 0.0667264976115 426% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 48.8420337079 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 12.1743820225 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 100.480337079 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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