Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Arts and military are as disparate as chalk and cheese. There is nothing alike in the two spheres and yet they are monitored by a common body which is the government. However, the investments made in both these domains are markedly different due to their incongruous nature. The given recommendation suggests that the funding for both arts and military should be equivalent. Hence, there is the need for an exegesis to expound further on the recommendation.
The role of arts leans towards entertainment or culture. It is not something extremely vital for existence of a society however, it is not something that can be entirely neglected. On the other hand, military has a desideratum position in the various domains governed by the government. It is definitely paramount for day-to-day functioning and minor lapses or peccadilloes can be tantamount to major scuffles on a global level.
Hence, aligning with the aforementioned reasoning, it is inequitable to place both of them at the same level and invest in them same sums of money. Since, military covers greater range including air-force, navy, border security, national police, etc; a greater sum needs to be allotted here. It needs to stay abreast with the advancing technologies to enhance the security of a country and at the same time ensure a halcyon functioning of the society.
Arts on the other hand does not require as drastic investment as military. A million dollars invested in strengthening the forces will be highly efficacious and salubrious than an awe-inspiring cultural facade or museum that would serve less purpose for the society. A monument, or artificial attraction created by highly-skilled artists would have impact but with a limited scope. As a contrast, better fighter planes, ammunition, coastal weapons and submarines and a stricter mechanism of keeping an eye on the country's borders would not only protect its citizens but also prevent losses that accompany conflicts and wars.
Nevertheless, this does not imply that arts should be undermined and cultural progress should be stymied. Undoubtedly, arts also serves a higher purpose which is as a tourist attraction, increasing revenues in the form of taxes and aesthetically beautifying a surrounding. It adds money in the national coffers and provides the country a global recognition. It is what makes the nation shine in the spectrum of the world.
Also, it is worth noting that a greater sum invested in military would not be equivalent to a stronger and robust nation free from any woes. It is not about the quantity of money involved as it is about the quality of investment. Therefore, investments must be made after a thorough, compelling research on past expenditures and after understanding the requirements of the current society. National wealth is an important resource, and its spending must be done wisely and in an extremely calculated way without compromising on any of the essential tasks of the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2500.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 480.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20833333333 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08040401391 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535416666667 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 789.3 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.495115733 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.166666667 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45833333333 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118061570013 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034194115452 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031496329134 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622113744588 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352597532416 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 155.0 100.480337079 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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