The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
I totally agree with the author's statement that the greatness of any individual can be decided after they pass and not by their contemporaries. The quality of a man and man's achievement can be measured only on his absence. Only when we come to know the great quality of a man during his absence, we will start to respect, adulate, grab aspiration. Hence, I believe that only ones absence can determine ones greatness.
There are several people whom do not exist but their greatness and their achievements are extant. Dr. APJ Abdul Kalam, the great scientist of India, did so many achievements during his lifetime. In spite of poverty at home, he struggled to pursue in his field of interest, that is rocket science, and discovered many aspects in his field. Dr. Kalam is now no more, but his ideas, qualities, and his thoughts are still in our hearts. Students draw aspirations from this great person and and try to become one such great citizen like him.
One more example to depict here is greatness and quality of the great Buddha. Buddha, a philosopher, thinker, gave dictum to this world which even today is accepted by many social group and is followed. During his time, there were so many contemporaries who begrudged him, his style of thinking. His teacher himself did not like him as Buddha was having strong prescient knowledge and the finest quality of thinking. Many people during his time accepted the dictum made by Buddha an started following them. Even after his death, his retinue are numerous and his greatness is appreciated everywhere.
During twelfth century, Galaleo Galali, a German scientist, a philosopher stated that the earth is round and it rotates around the Sun. Many of his contemporaries disagreed with such statement and spoke against him. But after certain years his facts were proved to be the perfect. When contemporaries are asked to measure the greatness of an individual, then chances of finding the facts are more. But when an individual is not existing but his works are measured and appreciated. This discrepancy of not appreciating the greatness of a person and extolling him or her after they pass is existing in this world. This is a paradox, but it is inevitable to accept it.
Thus, in total, I totally believe that ones greatness and achievements are measures and given an applause only when the individual is not existing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ve that only ones absence can determine ones greatness. There are several people ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...draw aspirations from this great person and and try to become one such great citizen li...
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Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...time accepted the dictum made by Buddha an started following them. Even after his ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, then, thus, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91563275434 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73194343883 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6580247497 60.3974514979 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1304347826 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5217391304 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.17391304348 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136816521724 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474516369362 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058809289464 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874062961094 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531377203934 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.