Having children is less important than it was in the past.
The topic presented the controversial issue of whether having children is less important these days than it was in the past. Indisputably, in past, people relate the children with more hands to work in fields. A children is considered an opportunity and an assest for the family. But nowdays, a lots of investment are done in children education, in their career, in their upbringing and at the end, children do not pay enough attention to their parents in their old age life. Nevertheless, in present, people still consider their children as increased human strength for the family. Children are considered the gifts of god and people want to spend their life with them. There, I disagree with the opinion that these days having children is considered less important and would like to argue that this perceptions changes by human to human. However, large majority of population still want to have a son or a daughter in their life. Further, there are more reasons, I mentioned to support my points.
First of all, people love children. They want to play with them, care them and love them. I would like to point out that the children plays a very important period of human life. To illustrate, let us look at the example of newly married couple. After four-five years of their marriage, they start thinking about having a baby. Why they think about it? What is the need to have a baby ? Are their marriage or relations not complete without a baby. The answers of these questions is No. Without a baby, the life is not complete for these couple. Having a baby brings completeness in their life. In this circumstances, obviously the children provides a emotional connection to their parents. Parents feels happing seeing their toodler doing cute and funny things. They keep posting their daily pics in their social networking sites and want others to see their children cuteness.
Furthermore, apart from emotional need, children still support a lot to their parents in their old age life. Specifically, when parents get any diseases or need any hospitalisation, then there are only their children on whom the parents relie more support. The present covid situation hospitalization in India can be best presented as illustration. As we know that covid generally attack old age people having low immunity. Hence, lots of old age people are affected in India by covid cases. But if you see these people in hospitals, you would notice that maximum such patients are attended by their children, sons and daughters. Children provide support to their parents in their difficult situations which no one can deny. Therefore, both common sense and personal experience have told us that children are still important.
Admittedly, these days educations cost are increasing day by day. For completing a bachelor course in USA requires a lot money, nearly half million dollors. The more children would require more education cost. Moreover, there are other types of cost apart from education and most important the time involved in their upbringing. This is especially when it comes to hard for parents to afford such costs. In addition, there are couples who do not like to have children instead they go adoption for orphans. However, the above arguments does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that having children is less important these days.
In conclusion, although people choices have been changed greatly towards children regarding their importance towards family, wealth, and strength, children still preferred by parents. Along with providing human strength, children give emotional pleasure to their parents. In fact, lots of people live only for their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3077.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 603.0 442.535393258 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10281923715 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9554069778 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67444890883 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 296.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49087893864 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 927.9 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 40.0 20.2370786517 198% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8818475658 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.925 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.075 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287444946235 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754667908669 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100581998303 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178614197843 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823162894759 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.