The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
After the merge of computers, some people might feel threatened by the abilities of computers, such as finishing calculation in a split-second, translating any language, and going heavy lift for human beings. Many of the functions even can replace human labor, therefore some people think that machines might progress and eventually defeat humans one day with technologies continuous progressing. However, in my stance, machines would never smarter than or surpass humans for the following reasons.
First of all, machines are not advanced by themselves, but by human beings. It is people who write programs and apply the programs in the machines. In other words, humans control machines. Without the human intelligence, machines are nothing but only many metals combined together. For instance, without engineers who install firmware and software on a computer, the computer cannot do anything, even basic functions. Furthermore, those functions, like calculation, are written by engineers, too. Therefore, that is humans who really control machines.
Moreover, some people might argue that artificial intelligence can learn by themselves and they would obtain higher intelligence that people after they learn many things. Nevertheless, AI program is also written by researchers. AI program only memorize people behaviors and evaluate the possibilities of every choices, and then choose the best one. To illustrate, in the eminent Go competition between human and AI, AlphaGO, the person won the last game since he changed his steps. It was because that AlphaGo just imitated the person's behavior. While the person found a new method to conquer his old method, the computer was defeated.
Admittedly, machines can do many things to help people, and even things a person cannot do, such as lifting one hundred kilograms at a time. Notwithstanding, no matter the artificial intelligence or machines which serve easy and repetitive functions, they are all created and controlled by human beings. They might be created to replace some human labor and even delicate human services, but they cannot surpass human minds since they do not have brains like humans do.
To sum up, the plot of humans being conquered by computers would solely show up in movies but not real life. Humans have many native advantages which machines do not have. Additionally, machines are created by humans, not themselves.
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Essay evaluation report
Position: Machines can outdo human beings in many cases, but they are and will always remain under human control.
A. In terms of memory and computing as well as other technical operations, computers can do much better than human beings. //your argument 3
B. However, in terms of creation, machines can never surpass human intelligence, for it is illogical that “inferior” human minds can create “superior” artificial intelligence.
C. Still, it is necessary for human beings to guard against the advanced technology and see to it that machines are created to serve human needs.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 375 350
No. of Characters: 1960 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.401 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.227 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.701 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 111 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 81 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.045 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.565 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.305 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.515 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
After the merge of computers, some people might feel th...
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Line 5, column 529, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... because that AlphaGo just imitated the persons behavior. While the person found a new ...
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'for instance', 'such as', 'first of all', 'in other words', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248275862069 0.240241500013 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.16091954023 0.157235817809 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0712643678161 0.0880659088768 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0689655172414 0.0497285424764 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0344827586207 0.0444667217837 78% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101149425287 0.12292977631 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0390804597701 0.0406280797675 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84533958137 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0114942528736 0.030933414821 37% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00459770114943 0.0016655270985 276% => OK
Determiners: 0.0804597701149 0.0997080785238 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0298850574713 0.0249443105267 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0114942528736 0.0148568991511 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2404.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 375.0 452.878318584 83% => OK
Chars per words: 6.41066666667 6.0361032391 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.413333333333 0.366273622748 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.317333333333 0.280924506359 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224 0.200843997647 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157333333333 0.132149295362 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84533958137 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 219.290929204 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.48968727796 114% => OK
Word variations: 63.5026275378 55.4138127331 115% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0454545455 23.380412469 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3568525939 59.4972553346 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.272727273 141.124799967 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 23.380412469 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.863636363636 0.674092028746 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 48.7787878788 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.46956521739 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361771356014 0.391690518653 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0908509093501 0.123202303941 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0547916061717 0.077325440228 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474294741431 0.547984918172 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122502533549 0.149214159877 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123215813408 0.161403998019 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740755534319 0.0892212321368 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.248180372467 0.385218514788 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0390849094652 0.0692045440612 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224026805879 0.275328986314 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455178230001 0.0653680567796 70% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations to cover all aspects.