The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
The author states here that human minds will always be superior to machine in every aspect , because they are created by humans. Indisputably, in recent years humans are trying to build machines which can work on its own and they can replace humans. Nevertheless, this machines are build by humans so, in the end every key of future or key of superiority lies within the humans. Thus, generally I agree with the statement that humans will always be superior then the machines.
First of all, what is machine?. Machine is which make daily work of human easy. Everything that is made by human is due to only one goal "To Make World a Better Place". And humans have developed so many things in digital era and they are constantly trying to make world a better living place. In this race, humans have developed many machines which had reduce the work done by humans. Although, question rises by the community is whether it will be helpful or not. And answer to these question is "YES". There are many cases we can tell that in which machines have eases our daily work. For example, motor car- this specific invention has changed world in every way, distant between world is reduced by this innovative invention. And after evolution of motor car, men have tried many different other sources to travel from one place to another. Surely, machine have eases our work.
Moreover, In recent years humans trying to build artificial intelligence. This artificial intelligence called A.I. will think like humans. This A.I. concept is filmed in many movies and mostly in movies it is portrayed as very bad thing to human world. So, world need to understand the concept of A.I. that it will not replace any human work or reduce the employment. It will surely make our work lot more easier. This A.I. machines work like humans but they can't replace any humans. The key to decide about machine's or human's superiority is also in the hands of humans. Consequently, it is also proven that things we have build is for improvement of our world.
Admittedly, there are cases that machines are making humans addicted to them. For instance look at the Digital Mobile Phones. In today's world, every one in the world has mobile phones. And this addiction is increasing day by day. Don't try to judge addiction as superiority. This addiction has spread all over the world, and surely this addiction has made world very aloof place. Everyone around us are busy on Digital Social Media but, no one are trying to engage in the surroundings they are in. This case have surely deteriorated humans ability. However, humans have made these things so, only human have power to decide what they want.
In conclusion, some cases of human's innovation have made world addicted to machines, but mostly machines have improved human's ability to think and work in more efficient way. As long as some measures are performed by humans, humans will always be superior then machines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: reduced
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Suggestion: reduced
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Suggestion: easier
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25817555938 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.175559380379 0.157235817809 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0636833046472 0.0880659088768 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0688468158348 0.0497285424764 138% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0361445783133 0.0444667217837 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104991394148 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0499139414802 0.0406280797675 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46180554107 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0309810671256 0.030933414821 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0740103270224 0.0997080785238 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0172117039587 0.0249443105267 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0120481927711 0.0148568991511 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2962.0 2732.02544248 108% => OK
No of words: 507.0 452.878318584 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84220907298 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331360946746 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205128205128 0.280924506359 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.140039447732 0.200843997647 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0907297830375 0.132149295362 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46180554107 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 219.290929204 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439842209073 0.48968727796 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.2830192428 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6194690265 184% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 13.3421052632 23.380412469 57% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9176922431 59.4972553346 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9473684211 141.124799967 55% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3421052632 23.380412469 57% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.421052631579 0.674092028746 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 33.854925776 51.4728631049 66% => OK
Elegance: 1.47239263804 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30287323426 0.391690518653 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107395464108 0.123202303941 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0995937809481 0.077325440228 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.375003194016 0.547984918172 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142260679602 0.149214159877 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866815206898 0.161403998019 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796872551514 0.0892212321368 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.349442473473 0.385218514788 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.060449117755 0.0692045440612 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222861646001 0.275328986314 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759900115795 0.0653680567796 116% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 10.4325221239 220% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88274336283 266% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 18.0 7.22455752212 249% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 28.0 13.5995575221 206% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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