Truth is certainly the hot-button issue of the moment, specially, facing dynamic changes in all the life sectors every day. At the heart of the debate over the crucial truths being as mysterious or uncomfortable for people, moreover, at first glance they are attacking it until get accepted. Thus, I generally disagree with the statement that truths are uncomfortable and ambiguous for people and they are fighting before accepted it. So, the essay including the reasons and examples will elaborate my preference.
To begin with, the first and the foremost point coming to the mind is the multifarious benefits that comes from revealing truths and amount of positive changes that impacted our life. In other words, I would like to point out that truths are the concrete meaning of science, the foreseen information, and the only face for knowledge.To illustrate one vivid example is without knowing the importance of electricity in our life and get deeper facts about how it is produce, conduct and the resources of it, how we can undermine these facts and describe it as uncomfortable!. In contrast, the debate may seem plausible if we take our ancestors as an example and how they were preclude using a lot of technology that based on strong facts. Consequently, it is pretty obvious that truths are not cryptic, and it is easy to get the benefit.
Moreover, the second vital point should be taken into consideration is revealing truths will facilitate our life by avoiding us from myriad of arguable questions. Specifically, focusing more how to improve new aspects. Both common sense and personal experience have told us that what comes to get life better, without problems are not uncomfortable. Hence, one striking example, thinking how to maximize benefits from certain truths such thinking how to use renewable energy to save the world from the global worming and decrease the emission instead of think is good or not good truth.
Admittedly, some people are attacking and do not accept truth easily. This is true especially when it comes to ordinary uneducated people who follow traditional rules and habits from their culture. In addition, they do that in order to feel reassure, certain, and can control every things so there is no need to new truths. But, the proponent are eager to exposed for new facts and truth because they are avid to what is new and strongly believe in revitalization the world. For example, we can notice the noticeable difference between the developed and the developing countries. However, the above argument does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that truths are very annoying and vague to people and it is hard to accepted it for the previous reasons and examples.
In conclusion, and due to aforementioned reasons and examples, truths are unarguably important and shorten long distances for people, and is not reliable to mention that it is hard and uncomfortable to all people in general and part of truth success is expected attacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...truths. But, the proponent are eager to exposed for new facts and truth because they ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in general, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2504.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04838709677 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79179058904 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542338709677 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 789.3 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9449793548 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.789473684 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1052631579 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15789473684 5.21951772744 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158542556692 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489900268642 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491487725455 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900431060261 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264621450855 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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