It is possible to pass laws that control or place limits on people s behavior but legislation cannot reform human nature Laws cannot change what is in people s hearts and minds

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the best'.
Suggestion: not the best
...to live comfortably. But these laws can not best solution, the government can ban them f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, in fact, such as, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 270.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31481481481 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73127745628 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540740740741 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.3160420748 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.454545455 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323274978025 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15448115669 0.0831039109588 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170115483927 0.0758088955206 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280759837558 0.150359130593 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.23365139348 0.0667264976115 350% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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