Cities preserve the culture and are incipient of neo traditions; the statement stands questionable as the absolute contribution of society matters more than any specific populace.
To begin with, villages and towns are conventionally preferred by journalists and writers researching on traditions. To get a profound understanding of aged traditions and be-quested cultures these authors frequent country side than cities. It is therefore, implied that villages and towns preserve most of the archaic culture and traditions.
Moreover, the cities are epitome of modernization. Almost all the cities are developed keeping latest trends in mind. And, why not! any city has to cope up with the daily needs of dense population and an advanced society. Preserving cultural heritage in designs and lifestyle in cities has to bear a cost, which typically does not fit the bills of an economic husbandry. Cities have a requisite to adopt to the lean, practical and fast pace of lifestyle their residents have.
Furthermore, Villages have all the time and space they need to enjoy their legacy culture. The society in villages and small towns are more dedicated towards traditional lifestyle and legacy cultures. Take for an example the metropolitan cities of India are far modernized and sleek as compared to the villages and towns, which are rife with traditional heritage.
However, major renowned cities in china, have preserved their culture equally well. The government their must have given financial and moral aid to protect their culture. Secondly, cities do provide some grounds for inception of new traditions. As the societies in cities are a mix of cultures. People from various parts of country have moved here for earning their livings and these people bring discreet cultures with them. Take for an example Delhi, from Holy, Diwali to Christmas, Easter and new year's eve, every event is celebrated here with convivial feelings.
Conclusively, few examples are there which display that cities too can value and develop traditions. But, it is mostly in towns and villages where these traditions happen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Any
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...rounds for inception of new traditions. As the societies in cities are a mix of cu...
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...ly, Diwali to Christmas, Easter and new years eve, every event is celebrated here wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37237237237 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7853755358 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5980852071 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.45 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.65 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156533609469 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491600017513 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346467243581 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835380941759 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183753845952 0.0667264976115 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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