It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
Social group is a broad definition, which we use to present a specific gathering of people by different occupations, location, relation, education and so on. Considering the feature of human that we are gregarious animals, I largely agree with the statement that it is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
As is known to us all, social interaction plays such an important part in our lives that nearly nobody could realize his or her value without it.According to Maslow’s hierarchy needs theory, people have the psychological tendency of identifying with a certain social group, in which they could find an appropriate position and play the social role. There are two kinds of groups depend on the relationship and numbers of its members: the primary group and the secondary group. The former one usually consists less people with more intimate relationships, such as family members or best friends, while the latter may refer to a large amount of people with same goal or interests, such as your colleges. Based on the social role theory, a person has to play various roles in different groups. For example, a woman performs as a strict and hard boss when she works, but when she comes back home, she acts like a gentle and considerate mother. Such case s of role transformation almost happen on everyone’s daily life, so we have to remind ourselves what social groups we are in if we want to behave appropriately. It is absurd that you behave carelessly and rudely at the face of your employer because he is like your father.
Identification with certain groups does influence us a lot. People tend to simulate the behaviors of others in the reference group, especially for teenagers. Recent researches on American high school students have shown that the phenomena of smoking, drinking or even crimes are likely to take place in cluster. Sociologists have also investigated into the problem which they call “peer effects”, and establish models to prove the hypothesis: young adults do feel intangible pressure to conform with others, no matter that these behaviors are deemed by their parents. Also, some specialists have found that people are inclined to get happiness from comparing with their reference groups. Esterlin’s Paradox shows that people’s happiness do not always go up as the economics thrives-- there maybe a more important factor rather than absolute income, such as relative income, that effect people most.
Furthermore, overly identification with one’s social groups may lead to unexpected results. Although in Plato’s The Republican, the society is well stratified and grouped under the reign of a great leader, it is too realistic to become true in reality. In some societies the social stratification are not only obvious but fixed. The lack of fluidity offers less chances for people in lower classes to climb up, and thus may spurn the development of the whole society. For example, in India, where the Caste system entrenched in traditional culture, people are highly aware of which classes they belong to, they are used to it and seldom desire to change there social status. Therefore, despite that we need to behave on different conditions, we should not confine ourselves in a fixed group ;in certain cases, we need to believe that we could change our social groups by endeavors.
In sum, it is natural for people to define themselves through our social groups so that they could behave themselves, but we should also not restrain ourselves in certain groups, only through our own endeavors could we change the position.
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- Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.Reason:People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes. 80
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 60
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. 70
- Some people believe that in order to thrive, a society must put its overall success before the well-being of its individual citizens. Others believe that the well-being of a society can only be measured by the general welfare of all its people 80
- Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them. 80
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
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Verbs: 0.139183055976 0.154291517835 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10741301059 0.0886310499679 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0559757942511 0.0506014161523 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.071104387292 0.0449626384858 158% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133131618759 0.123526278965 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0196671709531 0.0379742944744 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80553568642 2.82910677849 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0317700453858 0.0316879551592 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00302571860817 0.0014075125626 215% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0680786686838 0.0950106342287 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0151285930408 0.0245489744465 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0136157337368 0.0157978311181 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
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No of words: 593.0 478.390804598 124% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12141652614 6.0591788892 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93473315629 4.65681771538 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.401349072513 0.369966551584 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261382799325 0.285172536893 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185497470489 0.207245337619 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134907251265 0.136322040163 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80553568642 2.82910677849 99% => OK
Unique words: 325.0 234.298850575 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548060708263 0.492565540709 111% => OK
Word variations: 70.9411768129 56.8184620615 125% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 21.1264367816 104% => OK
Sentence length: 26.9545454545 23.7468607788 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3259234711 62.0618507366 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.0 143.81877709 115% => OK
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Paragraphs: 5.0 4.87931034483 102% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.71264367816 78% => OK
Readability: 53.0928253871 52.2641144681 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.43181818182 1.64547068916 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0842467261839 0.11556216369 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.094361920947 0.0736162880345 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.485436964408 0.531340600358 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171842708076 0.15197228837 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123163309308 0.158818324754 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144218337058 0.0851127212816 169% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.37832204858 0.388921930462 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0128916078309 0.0677916285025 19% => Paragraphs are close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277403624169 0.28015025965 99% => OK
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Task Achievement:
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Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30459770115 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.96264367816 121% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.10632183908 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.93390804598 76% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.04597701149 131% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 15.0862068966 106% => OK
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Rates: 83.67 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.0 Out of 6