The leader has always changed the path of the crowd to guide them to his or her appropriate desire path. But what make them leader while enormous other people just follow the leader. Some people believe leaders have an innate ability that other do not, while others claim all of the people could be a leader just they should learn how to lead people and leading is a skill, not a gift. I strongly agree with the latter statement and I will explain my reasons.
First of all, I believe you could rarely find innate abilities, and I think most abilities learnable by hard-working and persistence, likewise leading skills. There are a lot of courses, books, and videos on YouTube that learn people how you can present a speech and how you can influence others. Besides, for some who are interested, there are lots of universities and programs that learn politics to students. These are some sources that could improve leading skills for interested people. For example, Bill Clinton, former United States' president, intended in the political program and for the long term was a senator which improved his skills for leading people. Finally, after achieving appropriate knowledge and skills, he was nominated for the presidential election and became successful. I believe his success is not because of an innate gift, completely inverse, it is due to hard-working and persistence in his path.
Moreover, apart from different courses and programs, the environment could be an important parameter in presenting a leader. In some societies, with unfair situations, some may think to free their society, so they strive in this path. For example, Mahatma Gandhi and Nelson Mandella could be a good example of leaders who try to free their people. Due to the situation and the social environment, they try to lead their people while if their country were free, they may not become a leader.
On the other hand, some people maintain that leading people is an innate gift and some people are a leader when they born. They exemplify some teenagers or kids that are a leader of his or her fellows without any education and learning. Although their ideas look cogent at the first glance, I reckon they did not consider their family. Some family environments provide some situation that kids behave like a leader.
In conclusion, although some may think leading is a gifted skill, I believe leading skills could be learnable by courses, programs, and videos. I can name Bill Clinton, Gandhi, and Mandella as some leaders who have special education and were in a special environment.
- “Governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital to the protection of national security.”Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider w 16
- Some people feel that there is too much emphasis on getting an education and that governments should spend money on leisure time activities for young people too To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Society is based on rules and laws It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field Write 66
- In any field of endeavor it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...y that other do not, while others claim all of the people could be a leader just they shou...
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Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...books, and videos on YouTube that learn people how you can present a speech and how yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, so, while, apart from, for example, i reckon, i think, in conclusion, of course, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94907407407 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58195154204 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49537037037 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6137402316 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.80952381 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.21951772744 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10678606031 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371567327677 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338286799552 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579303060711 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401244545166 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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