The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Having intensive enhancement in the world of technology & science, people's regular life is surrounding by lot of benifecial stuffs to make their lives more convenient. Indisputably, this things helps a great number of work in individuls life & somehow currently personnel are qite dependent on this materials. However, this is not quite necessary to say that this inhibits individuals freedom, rather by the help of this peoples daily life becomes more easy so that people can provide more focus on other cardianl deals which enables them to build up themsleves with a more rigorous & independent ones.
First of all, narrting the hidden point which is people invents this luxury things to make their life eaiser in order to make them free from meager importance works. Like what is the profit if a scientist have to go to a post office by walk to send his papers where he can easily use a automated car which saves his valuable time to work on his projects? Another example can be grabbed from the a life of a president. Usually in Bangladesh & almost all the south asian countries president's use helicopter to see a remote area of his country. Is this can be said as luxury convenient? Indeed, this is not because as a very busy individial the president have to save to up his time to conduct more work for his country.
Another fact is that, the easily avialable staffs make every individuals more strong if we see this from a critical angle of view. The gradual development is happening silently by the use of so called luxyry materials. Like I-pad,E-book reader e.t.c seems a luxury stuffs for a individuals especially for a student.However,this enables the students to do so many things which are not visible easily.For example, in Bangladesh a lot of university student necessarily need the E-book or Pad to foster their study as most of the professors nowadays gives the lectures through presentation. Besides this, the avialable usage of lot of tutorials & cultural things can easily see on the youtube through pad. Does it looks like unnecessary? No way , as it posits to build up the individuals cultural & academics sense more profoundly.
On the other hand, sometimes the materials creates some problems when the people are extremely depend on it. Nevertheless, this is not a usual scenario, when the creative humans will know they are depending on a materials they are quickly try to neglect it because thats a human nature. For example, Now facebook is becoming a addiction to everyone so the facebook authority have opened up some option that one can take break from facebook if he or she thinks this can deterioate his developement.
In recapitultion, unless there is addiciton on this luxury materials this never impede human developement on any fact rather helps to enhance his ability to do so much more on his weaken point to create himself a perfect one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2407.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95267489712 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85780126108 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5329218107 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 783.0 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.0434376194 60.3974514979 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.684210526 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5789473684 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101813697354 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034242341109 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344978418276 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568168231198 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030099104292 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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