The study of history has enabled mankind to elucidate the advent of technological advancements, the evolution of "Homo Neanderthalis" to the "Homo Sapiens" of today, and also account for several behavioral aspects of social importance. The prompt argues that the benefit of such a study is to assert, without any doubt, that people today are no different from their counterparts of earlier times. Indisputably, certain traits of human nature have stood the test of time, but being an evolutionary species, mankind is ever changing in its cognitive and visceral behaviors. In my opinion, history as a study serves not only important to characterise such evolutionary traits but also highlights the differences between us and our ancestors.
With the advent of Darwin's "Theory of Evolution" where he posits that survival, as a basic need, solely determines whether a certain species become extincts or withstands the tribulations of time, people have grown more accustomed with the idea that key differences between us and those who lived in earlier times have led to survival and evolution of our species. For example, technological advancements of irrigation systems have led civilizations to flourish in the Indus Valley. Also, the ability to locomote using only a couple of our limbs, contrary to our predecessors, apes, who used all of their four limbs, have had significant changes in speed and efficiency.
Similar key changes in behavioral aspects of mankind such as shifting food habits are also key to establishing perceptions how history corrobates the idea that Darwin once put forth. Our ancestors of pre-historic times resorted mostly to hunting food whereas we as a society have developed agricultural sources as the most important factor catering to our diets. Whilst hunting, many were faced with perilous situations and led to significant loss of lives, whereas moving to more domesticated ideas such as dairy farming, poultry or reaping crop harvests mitigated the adverse effects of having wild animals as the primary source of food.
Indisputably, certain human traits are prevalent even today, which are quite similar to what our ancestors did. Such traits do not necessarily prove that our ancestors were no different from us. On the contrary, these traits enlighten us on how on certain paradigms, our behaviours are quite similar to those of earlier times. For example, the existence of social groups were present even during pre-historic times. People have been living in such groups since times immemorial. However, a more meticulous study of such social or racial groups entails the differences between their beliefs and ours. For example, tribes were usually xenophobic in earlier times and were hostile towards any non-native individual. On the contrary, we as a society, encourage diverse groups and new minded people as its benefits far outweigh the detrimental effects.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with the statement that the main benefit of studying and sharing historical knowledge is to assert that we as a society are no different from our ancestors. History serves to show that even though, certain behavioral traits have stood the test of time, the moral beliefs and societal trends have changed over the years. In fact, the ever changing nature of societal beliefs is what defines mankind as a social and progressive being. A careful study reveals further insight how evolutionary changes, technological advancements, and behavioral changes over time has led to the established society that we are so connected to today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3036.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 565.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37345132743 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87542086881 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9973627691 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481415929204 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 971.1 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1088642937 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6818181818 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13636363636 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17858907501 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547091551256 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539514657874 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100754503922 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332875334662 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 100.480337079 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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