men and women are not suitable for every job because of their inherent physical differences
The topic states that men and women are different physically and so they are not equally suited for many tasks. I disagree with opinion.
it is true that men and women have different features. these features might enable them to undertake certain activities. but the specific jobs are very limited. one such activity is lifting heavy-weighted objects. men can easily pick luggage bags, furniture and so on. but this is one of the very limited tasked that fall in the category where a specific physical characteristic is needed.
most work required general physical attributes which are common in both population segments, and most other require more of thinking skills, emotional quotient and intelligence. thus, for these activities can be performed well by anyone regardless of their gender and are mainly dependent on individual’s case.
A good public speaker is one who is able to spellbound his or her audience. The person is required to be able pursue listeners well and ensure the words are well-articulated. The only physical attributes needed are ability to speak and modulate voice, none of which is gender-based. Similarly, the ability to driver motor cars well requires adequate practice to sharpen the skill, attentive mind and short response time. Again, these qualities are not limited to men or women.
many of the other important jobs require more of critical and creative thinking and lesser physical characteristics. these include treating patients, research and teaching. none of these are gender-suited roles. A lady doctor might be as competent as her male collogues, since it is dependent more on analytical skills and medical knowledge. Similar, a good Math teacher is one who is better at explaining concepts. A contributor in field of Science is one who able to thinking rationally. these roles require where limited physical ability and more of IQ and EQ.
it is true that some of the jobs require very specific physical ability which is mainly found in one of the two genders. but the list is very limited. most of the tasks are accomplished by general physical characteristic, found is most people, and majorly other skills which are dependent on one’s mind. thus, these are not limited to male or female population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, thus, well, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24250681199 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92245733154 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520435967302 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8714429898 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1153846154 23.4991977007 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173479023466 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482633557284 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699855225044 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106966695262 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653620949052 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.