The issue topic raises the controversial discussion of whether male and female physique is equally capable of performing various tasks or not. Indisputably, both men and women are equally competitive in all kinds of field. However, that does not disqualify the fact that the physical properties of men and women are dissimilar which provides them a certain edge over others in selective areas. Thus, i would generally disagree with the opinion that men and women have possess the same physical abilities and would argue that there are inherent physical dissimilarities between the two genders.
Firstly, men are more capable of performing tasks that involves heavy weight. To illustrate my point, let us look at the sports of heavy lifting as an example. If examined the difference between the average weight that the male heavy weight lifters lift to that of the the female lifters, then we can notice that the average weight lifted by male lifters is significantly heavier than that of female lifters. Consequently, it is pretty obvious that the study conducted on this sports utilizing the data from many years that there is a certain difference between the capabilities of male and female physique.
Furthermore, while comparing the difference between the men and female body, it can also be concluded that male physique gives a certain edge over females in the category of explosive strength. To support this argument, we can consider the example of sports like boxing, or even Mixed Martial Arts. Utilizing evidence, it has been demonstrated that male sports persons are superior to that of female sports persons regarding those two sports. Although, one can argue against that using the examples of boxer like Mary Kom or Mixed Martial Arts fighter like Rhonda Rhousey, who made it to the top and proved themselves as worthy of it. However, it must be acknowledged that few fighters from the female division cannot match par to par with the numerous fighters that the male division has produced, and further solidifying the claim that male and female physical capabilities are inherently different.
In conclusion, however nowadays women are giving a tough competition to men even in the fields in which they were thought to have a disadvantage because of their physical properties, as long as years of evidence and reports are examined, it can be concluded that men and female physiques are different and suitable for different tasks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, so, then, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1838790932 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81397520126 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523929471033 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.453303228 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3571428571 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 5.21951772744 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154410406095 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538079473363 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550909885294 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110352120953 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755648148167 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.8420337079 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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