Men and women can be considered as the two wheels of a cart. They both are mutually important to each other. We, as a human being of the twenty-first century, will not have to bias women in the theme of gender difference. Nature itself accept the existence of both genders than why not us? However, there are many tasks which seek the specific gender other than female. From the standpoint of feminist, it may seem bias but it is ineradicable fact.
First, women have a very sensitive body structure than men. They cannot do those works which demand high physical stress. We can see very rare that women are working as a yellow labor job holder in a big company. One could argue that women also can do an arduous job. But, we never have to forget that every month 4/5 days they seem very weak due to the mensuration. It is not a good idea to force them to work a physical job in these painful days. So, most of the physical labor seeking job is not equally suited for women.
Second, women are especially born to love and care for this entire world. Forgetting some out of sequence bad example, most of the women in the world are altruistic and lovely. They cannot be rude to us as compared to the men. So, many scholars posit that most of the rule and regulation enforcement job are not suit for the women. The study also shows that the male law enforcement officer is found more successful to control the crime and to maintain the peace and security than the women officer. Not only is this, in a house, if children are not eating anything, a mother good for taking care of them. On the other hand, if children are not doing homework and only stuck in the video game, then a father is needed to make them doing homework. It is because; women cannot be rude and giant by nature.
Moreover, most of the women are aesthetic. They love to maintain their beauty. So, many bellicose fields like armed force and military force are not suited for them. Even if, due to the slogan of inclusion, nowadays many woman troops are seen in leading military position, only male troops are sent to take part in major war or to maintain peace in major security threatening areas. There may be another possible and probably the best reason that if women are pregnant and mother of small baby there will be a great limitation on work in many fields. Any women cannot go to the field with carrying baby either in the womb or in the leap.
By making a long story short, men and women both are equal as a human. But, there are some limitation prevails between men and women in many tasks. The physical difference and some unavoidable natural responsibility make women weaker than men. The women should accept that and the men will respect their special ability. By throwing narrowest feeling and biases from mind we all have to work together which will best suit for us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: NOT_US1[1]
Message: Did you mean 'use'?
Suggestion: use
... existence of both genders than why not us? However, there are many tasks which se...
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Line 9, column 325, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'throwing the narrowest'.
Suggestion: throwing the narrowest
... will respect their special ability. By throwing narrowest feeling and biases from mind we all hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2344.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50769230769 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27004874436 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492307692308 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6433512231 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.25 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53125 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307278193293 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806448921974 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715872408457 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179842358764 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873117848778 0.0667264976115 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 14.1392134831 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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