Nowadays education is a vital part of every individual's life and almost everybody are received or receiving school education. There exist a lot of different opinions on required school curriculum. Some believe, that it should be the same for every school and only in college students can adjust curriculum depending on their own needs and interests. Personally, I agree with that and believe that united curriculum is beneficial to a nation.
General purpose of school is to educate individual, give him knowledge of a world and processes that exist in it and overall to create a well-educated member of a society. That's why I believe that same national curriculum should be adopted, as it will assure that everybody was taught same material and have some mininal knowledge in literature, math, biology, chemistry, physics, law and other vital subjects. This all will unify the society and might help to decrease the social differenciation in it.
One may argue, that all students are different and same national curriculum will restrict people and cut their chances to open their talents. It is true to some extent, that there are some talented individuals which need advanced or modified curriculum. However, there always exist spesialized schools which can collect those students and help them to work with their talents. In Russia, in every big city there are public schools that specialize on art, mathematic, music, acting and other activities. Students there have extra classes and modified curriculum in order to fulfill their needs.
Talking about benefits of the same nation society, it is important to admit that this system will help colleges and universities as well. When everybody received same education, it is easier to evaluate applicants and judjment will be fair. Every school student will have the same chances to be admitted to a high-grade university, as curriculum in his or her school was the same for a whole nation. Nobody will be in superior position, bacause of the money of his or her parents that provided school with better curiculum.
In conclusion, I believe that same national curriculum is a beneficial to the whole nation. It will be easier to universities and colleges to evaluate candidates, applicants will have fairier chances to be admitted and overall society will have samely educated members, which can decrease differentiation in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, talking about, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1974025974 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82598596254 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47012987013 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.384442794 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3888888889 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253742159811 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943772696003 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849586211303 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160889267751 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013169752421 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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