College serves as a gateway to get deeper understanding in the field of interest. Such platform shouldn't distract a student by enforcing compulsion of studying few subjects , one may not be interested in.
College is a place where one would be present to explore the beauty of physics , application of finance , life saving capacity of biology or the art of playing guitar. The enthusiasm of a student to learn these beautiful subjects shouldn't be hindered by enforcing a compulsion to read something else - like poetry , which isn't necessary to all the fields of study. For student's who lack interest in imaginative literature , such enforcement would discourage them from perceiving even what they love.
A student would be needing to invest much more time to complete the course if extra subjects been added. This is also a hindrance for great talent to start working for the society and contribute. moreover added subjects would lead to increase in the college fees and in turn an extra burden on most of students who has to repay their education loans.
it's agreeable that interdisciplinary study leads to multidimensional thinking . It provides the student an opportunity to think outside the box . However it should be optional as enforcing such diverse thinking is a distraction to many fields of study rather than a escape from narrow minded mentality.
Hence imaginative literature should be optional to a student , and never a compulsion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 235.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1914893617 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00728087189 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634042553191 0.4932671777 129% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0488417089 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20119465887 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723279434584 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607389302454 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11973814982 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675771370859 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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