As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
"Machines are like the arm of we humans". The prompt recommends that the more people rely on technology to solve problems, the deterioration of their ability to think will happen. I mostly agree with this thought for the following three reasons.
To begin with, irrespective of the age the children or adults or grown-up people all rely on the technology for their day-to-day activities. For instance, a child gaining knowledge from technology like tablets, mobile, etc. earlier a child uses to go to school and gained the knowledge, for calculation he was taught different techniques and tricks whereas today they only rely on the calculator, even a simple addition or any arithmetic sums he can't do without use of calculation, this surely shrinks the ability to solve complex problems through once mind.
Further, even talking about adults, technology has grasped them so badly that they avoid physical activity and games instead prefer to stick on their mobiles posting and surfing to social media like Facebook, Instagram, etc. earlier one use to go out and had meetings with once friends and use to play together which increased their physical strength and mental activity, whereas now sitting onto sofa and sticking their eyes into mobile, it's only harming their body by diseases like obesity, eye-related problems, and back problems. this way technology has retarded their time and health at an early age.
Although not all invention of technologies is devastating, there is some technology which has resulted in a boon to human life. For instance, technologies like online Retail stores, online bill payment, etc. earlier people have to stand in a long hectic queue to get their payments done for electricity bills, mobile bills, etc whereas now due to services like Google pay, Paytm and many more one can easily pay off their bills sitting in once home. this has reduced their time and effort.
Thus on macro-scale technologies have both boons and curse on people's life. if one uses in the right manner it can turn around to be advantageous whereas if used for unnecessary, basic needs it can surely deteriorate the ability to think themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...mple addition or any arithmetic sums he cant do without use of calculation, this sur...
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Line 5, column 447, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...mple addition or any arithmetic sums he cant do without use of calculation, this sur...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e Facebook, Instagram, etc. earlier one use to go out and had meetings with once fr...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... and had meetings with once friends and use to play together which increased their ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...into mobile, its only harming their body by diseases like obesity, eye-related pr...
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Suggestion: This
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Suggestion: This
...y off their bills sitting in once home. this has reduced their time and effort. ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...e both boons and curse on peoples life. if one uses in the right manner it can tur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, whereas, as to, for instance, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15492957746 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71474479788 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.064714474 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277211930371 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961231285796 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111523915921 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173469859165 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106892567504 0.0667264976115 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.