People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
decision making is purely coincidental. some rely on self whereas others opt for parents, peer group or teachers when it comes to deciding about any kind of matters. The influence of others plays a vital role rather than the decision made by an individual which could be a good or bad one depending on the situation, which has a major role to play. Thus, I firmly believe that any kind of decision taken emotionally and later justified by means of logic cannot yield fruitful results.
A child often seek the helps of parents regarding the basic amenities like the choice of food, clothes education and even sports activities. they are fine tuned to get help from others right from their childhood and if they grow in this way they might be poor decision makers as they might not be in a position to think differently or be innovative with respect to handling issues surrounding them. Further, such kids may be raised up with low self esteem which could result in taking hasty decisions in the form of killing oneself for a simple reason like failing in an exam. this act tells us that they do things emotionally and hence end up with futile acts which cannot be rectified or acknowledged by means of logic.
moreover, if we consider in terms of the political front, we can witness politicians defying the rules and regulations laid down for the sake of public for their own goodness and well being. decisions taken hurriedly might lead to the deterioration of self and the public, in general. moreover, scientists and researchers often take risks to come up with a definite plan so that medicines could be found to cure diseases. if they feel scared to make emotional decisions, then the many findings that we witness today could not have been made possible. millions and millions of people will die every minute due to harmful diseases.
However, there are situations where men in power need not abide by certain laws. For instance, during a riot, only if shooting order is given will people disperse and this ensures the life of them being guaranteed. In such cases, for the safety of people, such decisions ought to be taken which leads to the welfare of the human beings. Otherwise, there will remain a question mark on the guarantee of life and property.
To conclude, we can reiterate the fact that any behavior learnt in childhood should be crippled if it leads to futile results, in which making poor decisions is one such example. Similarly, even though people hastily act based on a situation, if they spend some time to introspect themselves, then they could turn out to be good decision makers, which the world is in need to make the universe a better place for all of us to lead a peaceful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, then, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in general, kind of, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2255.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 475.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74736842105 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50991518546 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.685016854 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.684210526 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243463969586 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753073394454 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582194241308 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139456596495 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433558596353 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.