Scandals are useful because they focus our attention to problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
We always take pride when we see the burgeoning graph of development, but it fills the heart with sorrow after watching our media filthed with scandals. In this avaricious world coming across scandals in such a large number is of no surprise, some astonishes us too due to involvement of hetefore venerated people which may shatter the emotions of many people.
I agree with statement that scandals are useful to focus our attention to the problems. In such a world where trust and understanding is abating among the mob, providing evidence is of paramount importance and scandals work like cherry on the cake. It is not hidden from anyone how prevalent the corruption is among our beaurucrates, few years back understanding the concept of corruption was convoluted for the mob but as the number of scandals related to the latent money in various account like swiss accounts and hidden property were proved, the blindfold was completely removed. If scandals would have not been their, it would have been difficult to realise how grave the problem has become in our society.
Moreover, leakage of the photages of the various nobel leautrates and eminent personalities indulging in illicit activities or showcasing their purient nature helps us to understand the real nature of the person. Few days back, a reverent personality , "Shridharam Baba" was finally taken under bars for his sexual assaults towards the women in his ashram. More similar cases were also uncovered after this scandal. It was one of the major scandals of the year. It acted as an eye opener for the citizens of the nation, ho blindly trusted such babas and compared them with almighty.
Speakers and reformers play a very pivtol role in shaping our mind as they help us to analyze the situation in such a way that we can never think of, but their is a definite need to present some real life cases which can be an eye opener for this populace. But, it is also necessary to have a sense to congently distinguish the framed scandal and real scandal. Many cases have been cropping up where the images of altruitic people have been put on sake by the opposition, for their respected and endured ideologies. Now, it depends upon the people how they perceive each and every scandal. In such cases, the speaker or reformer is necessary to show the real scenario under which case has been conducted and how it has been mislead.They help to undertand the scenario with clear point of view.
Developing a sense of meticulously distinguishing real and framed scandals is necessary for the population. Scandals are like real life examples which helps us to realize how grave the problem has become and how this problem can be fight back in the future.
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- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention to problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. 70
- The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend."Of the two leading real estate firms in our town — Adams Realty and Fitch Realty — Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many 42
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2272.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 463.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90712742981 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69362756501 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529157667387 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7550329755 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.222222222 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7222222222 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27777777778 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19787017385 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651991126766 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658625620016 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987533572798 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503334973628 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.